Donneke Alorha

[donneke]

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General Character Information
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Character Name: Donneke Alorha
Character Age: Female
Character Gender: 16
Character Race: half daemon
Character Position: good

Character Personality: She is a very outgoing, naiive girl who ejoys being a snoop, and moving. Everywere. But although she is outgoing, she aslo has a short temper, and can sometimes not think of other people's feelings when she says things. But although she is like that constantly, she is a seeker of adventure, and is a very reliable friend to be around. She can also be kind and caring.

Character's Appearance:
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except, she wears tank tops, boots, and shorts, and carries around a sword. Like this:

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Battle Information
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Weapon Name: Hinotama
Weapon Appearance: a large silver blade with inlaid gold vines around the middle of the sword.

Abilities:

Ø Healing: she can speed up healing process around the wound, to stop the bleeding, and can give her energy to the person if need be. (if its herself, her energy level doesnt change. can only heal 2 times per battle)
Ø Gliding: can jump up in the air and glide for long amounts of time (rarely, takes up a lot of energy; takes 5 posts of cool down if needed to re-use)
Ø Fire-guide: Using this attack, her sword is engulfed in flames, and whenever she swings at a person, the fire does an extent of injury, along with the blade of the sword. (cool down of 2 posts)

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Character History
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Donneke as a baby was a happy, healthy infant. Her mother was a human, and her father was a daemon. As she grew to be 5, her father had need to leave her (they don’t know why, or at least, Donneke doesn’t) and the longer he stayed away, the more bitter she became, until she had nothing but hatred for the daemon; wile she brought up Donneke with more harshness than usual. Finally, she found another man, and got married to him, taking over their lives. When she was 14, her family disowned her, being the fact that they had wanted a son, and after trying for so long, got one. But she was not one to give up living. As she learned how to survive in the worlds that were known of. She would constantly hitch rides to other planets on other gummy ships (AKA: stow away) an dfinally got to Twilight town, were she settled down as her home planet, going back there for breaks every now and then from exploring the worlds. She found her sword in Olympus. She had raised some munny, and was trying to get into the tournament, when she discovered the sword in a sword-smith shop.
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Other
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Anything extra you want to add?

[Medy]

Just wondering, could you put the images into link form and host them on ImageShack or Photobucket, just to tidy them up and so that you're not stealing other people's bandwidth. ;D

Aside from that, just wanted to draw your attention to the healing rule we have.

4.Healing moves need limits, too. You can't have a healing move that heals you completely (or even half) and have no limit on it, because that makes you pretty much immortal, even a cool down isn't good enough. Waiting a page to full re-heal means someone HAS to defeat you in 1 page, or start all over again, but they keep the same damage on them. It is far too cheap. You need to have a limit on how many times it can be used. Full heals should be once a match at most, half heals should be 3 (of course, these numbers will vary). If you make a very complex healing ability, that isn't quite as simple, just use common sense, and a moderator will help work out the bugs on it.

So, as long as there's a restriction on how much she can heal herself in one turn, it's fine for you to have it.

[donneke]

okay!

[Medy]

Approved, locked and moved

Have fun role-playing.