Knoll

[kno]

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General Character Information
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Character Name: Ion
Character Age: 16
Character Gender: Male
Character Race: Other
Character Position: Neutral
Character Personality:
Ion is a shy, timid young man, with little taste for violence. He is always polite, and is very submissive, and modest. He is loyal, and will often do what people tell him to, unless the task proves to strenuous. In the face of danger, he is strong, and quick to help, but will often doubt his own abilities.

Character's Appearance: Apperance
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Battle Information
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Weapon Name: Akashika
Weapon Appearance: Naginata

Abilities:

Curse Slot[/u]
By hitting the target with the edge of Ashika, the edge releases a heavy poison into the target's body. The target will soon undergo mild pain in the pit of their stomach, before the pain becomes unbearable. The attack is not deadly unless the target is hit with it over 10 times.

Shinning Bind[/u]
The user creates a giant dome that holds all combatants inside the battlefield, and prevents anything from breaking in, or out. This is used to keep anyone from hurting others unnecessarily, or for keeping out any intrusions. until the user is dead, or unconscious. The barrier stretches out a quarter mile. It lasts five turns, and the cool-down is eight.

Akashic Torment[/u]
The user slams the Naginata into the ground, activating a white glyph that surrounds the target and the user. Fading pillars of light block out anything from leaving, and from the center, a giant white pillar of fire explodes up wards, severely burning things inside. Both the user, and the target are hit with the attack. It takes one turn to use, and the cool-down is four turns.

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Character History
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Ion grew up alone, lived alone, and did what he could to live right. He never stole, nor did he get money by frowned-upon means. He worked, and did small jobs in order to support himself, while learning the Naginata on the side. Because of his kind, timid nature heis quick to be picked on, and was always treated worse then animals. Despite it, he never complained, but only avoided those who picked up on him. However, everything before the age of five is a blur to him. As his powers grew greatly, he began to follow Scion around, despite Scion's sadistic, and crazy behavior. At the age of 16, he left, and followed Scion.
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Other
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Anything extra you want to add?

[Medy]

Is there any chance you could put some more detail into the History. It just looks rather... short and basic. Surely there's more to his story.

Ability 2: Shinning Bind: No. That move basically makes your character immortal for the battle, regardless of whether it prevents them from attacking from within. Edit in a cool-down for it please, a limit as to how long it will last. I'll supply you with a relevant cool-down based around its duration. Make sure it stays up for a reasonable period, nothing above 5 turns.

Ability 3: Akashic Torment: So, basically, the opponent becomes trapped inside and becomes completely incinerated by fire, yes? That would include you as well, seeing as you're also inside. Just wanting to clarify, 'tis all.

[kno]

Updated.

Shinning bind was meant to hold the entire combatants in one remote area, not a shield for Ion, but rather something to keep others from getting hurt.

Yes Akashic Torment hurts both the user, and the target.

[Medy]

Alas, even if its intentions were meant for means of containment, its properties would still have meant that you could have used it at will to simply keep you safe from all harm. Also, you'd trap the opponent which is a tad unfair.

As for Akashic Torment, make the cool-down four posts, five's a little bit harsh. I won't make you restrict it that much ;D

[kno]

Thankies

[owaz]

Accepted, locked, and moved to the accepted characters board.