C l o u d

[haiken]

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General Character Information
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Character Name: Cloud

Character Age: Seventeen

Character Gender: Male

Character Race: [Human/Nobody/Heartless/Other]

Character Position: [Good/Neutral/Evil]


Character Personality: Cloud is a very dark and mysterious individual. He tends to stay alone half the time. However, he can be loud and cocky, as well as obnoxious if front of his loved ones.

Character's Appearance: i18.tinypic.com/538eh6w.jpg
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Battle Information
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Weapon Name: Yumi

Weapon Appearance: (the sword in the picture) img111.imageshack.us/img111/3968/sasuke3090mm.jpg


Abilities:

• Grandslam - This is a very strong energy attack. To charge it, cloud raises his hand and begins to gather energy. (takes one post to gather) When gathered, it can shoot seven very powerful beams of energy. A very accurate attack. He can, however, only use it three times a battle. It takes five posts at the end of each time he uses it to recharge.
  
  
  
• Take Flight - Cloud flaps his one wing, and soars of into the night sky. Used for defense or high speed attacks. This attack exhausts him for two posts.
  
  
  
• Poison Gas -

[/b] Cloud widens his mouth, and blows poisious gas from a very special chamber within his stomach. If the opponent inhales this gas, it will poison them. It is very lethal. Can only use three times per battle, and takes seven posts to reuse it after use.


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Character History
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Clouds mother was born with two white wings, and his father with two black wings. At birth, Cloud was just a normal child, who lived a happy life with his friends, playing, play-fighting, school, the works. But then everything changed the day he became thirteen. Heartless took over his world. They invaded, and left Cloud with nothing. Clouds father decided, before he died, that Cloud would be the one to eliminate this threat. He was correct.
He transferred half of his power to Cloud - Which was the sword, and the one black wing. Cloud was proud. He named his sword.. Yumi. With that sword and the wing, he destroyed the threat, but the world was still... destroyed. So, he had to mvoe away..

To Traverse Town. There he met alot of good people, and decided he would live on his own. He got an apartment, and as a daily life, he fights Heartless and Nobodies. He has but one goal in life: To find more out about everything that went wrong in his world. So far, he has collected a few Ansem Reports; And he knows about Organization 13.


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[Admin]

You need to explain Grandslam better.

[Zero [Axel]]

I, personally, like how you stole your Poision Explosion attack from Dark Breath from Bilby's character: Somebody, the person that killed you with it not 2 hours ago. I don't know if theirs rules against using other's attacks but I'm sure it will be frowned upon.

[haiken]

Ohmajeez. More with the blah. I based my attack off of it because I fancy it. It's DIFFERENT. matter fact, I'mma just replace it. Not gonna stupid argue.


EDIT: Made it just poison gas.

[Admin]

Accepted. Locked and moved.