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Username: me

Gender:

Other Character(s): Nooooone.
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Name: Paul

Alias: Jack of Spades, the Jack

Age: Late twenties

Gender:

Race: Nobody, Human.

Alignment: Neutral

Origin: Wonderland
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Appearance:

Paul

Physical Features: Paul is large and very muscular, giving him an aura of grandeur. He's tall and quite handsome. He is usually seen in a specific form of solid matter, most often stone, and he hardly ever remains in his normal physical form.

Facial Features: The man has a rather square-shaped face, which is again good-looking, and has black, short-cut hair. He has lots of stubble and a slight mustache. He would seem kingly to some.

Clothing: Ordinary coats with ordinary jeans, Paul appears very normal because of his attire. He has blue gloves and blue boots.

Miscellaneous Items/Articles: He tends to have long collars and eye masks.

Personality:

Resolve: Paul's ultimate goal is to find love and bliss, even though he is a Nobody and cannot feel in the present.

Pursuit: Paul's belief in finding blissful emotion despite his physical state is like a blooming rose within a bush of thorns, and in order to keep this rose going strong and alive he must do whatever it takes.

Fears: Falling into oblivion and large bodies of water.

Hopes: To find happiness and positive ecstasy before fate claims him.

Hobbies: Stealing for munny, playing cards.

Public Personality/Private Personality:

Strangers will find Paul to be very intense and dark, and serious most of the time. Ever since he became a fugitive in Wonderland, his sociality was diminished greatly, especially since he is a Nobody. Nevertheless, he remains positive and down-to-Earth even in the public.

In private, Paul maintains the same seriousness and intensity that make up the base of his personality, but he is more socially active and tends to be more open with his thoughts. If someone were to become intertwined with his personal, private life, then they would probably enjoy his company far more than if they were merely an acquaintance. Even though he is a Nobody, Paul remembers his sense of humor.

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Weapons:

Weapon Name: Paul

Weapon Description: Paul pretty much uses his own body in stone form to destroy or harm. In stone form, Paul's body remains of one texture and one set of colors depending on what type of material he becomes. The easiest material for him to become is stone.

Unique Notes: None.

Abilities:

Base Ability: The Devil of Matter

Sub Abilities:
-Paul can become any type of solid material he pleases. If any part of him breaks off, it will regrow.
-Paul can turn objects into any type of solid material he pleases, but he must come into physical contact with the object.
-Paul possesses the power of superhuman strength.

Items:

Equips:

Distribution Points:

Physical Attack: 4
Physical Defense: 3
Magical Attack: 2
Magical Defense: 1
Reflexes: 1
Speed: 3
Awareness: 2

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History:

When Paul was whole, he was the Jack of Spades and resided in Wonderland. He lived a luxurious life of royalty with the King and Queen of Spades, and the rest of the Spades. His life was filled with joy and bliss, and so the Jack of Spades became very spoiled. His parents paid too much attention to building amazing contraptions and structures and spent little of their time with him, and so the Jack was left to deal with his own life, most of the time.

The Jack of Spades, due to his bratty nature, decided that he wanted more attention from the Spades, because he was given so little. However, they were too busy running errands for his parents. So, the Jack of Spades paid a visit to the Queen of Hearts, asking that she help him chop off the heads of the entire Spade population so that his parents would be forced to spend time on his vane requests.

However, she refused the request when she found that the Jack of Spades was a brat, and she ordered his head to be chopped off instead. The Jack of Spades struggled to escape but was caught and put on trial. Right before the Queen's final unfair and unjust decision was declared, the King and Queen of Spades arrived just in time, setting loose several vicious creatures to attack the Queen of Hearts and her army.

Unfortunately, the creatures ended up claiming the heart of the Jack of Spades when his parents grew angry with him, when they found the true reason of why he went to the Queen of Hearts. Several days later, the Nobody of the Jack of Spades ended up deep in the forest. He traveled to the Queen of Hearts and opposed her once again, and upon finding that he was the 'new' Jack of Spades (even though he was in fact the Nobody of the original Jack) the Queen marked him as a fugitive and attempted to have his head cut off.

However, the Nobody fled from the Queen and managed to escape from Wonderland, feeling betrayed by his parents, and strangely empty.
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Nahhhhh.
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[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

...I'm honestly unsure of what to say about this profile...

First of all, your abilities don't have a theme that they all fall under.

Second of all, your abilities all contain multiple abilities within them.

Third, Your resolve isn't fitting to a Nobody...though that might just be my opinion.

Fourth, you claimed he was a Nobody/Human. That's not really possible.

Fifth, Your history contains the Queen of Hearts, which is a canon character. Canons aren't allowed in histories.

Finally, you claimed he turned to a Nobody, though...there's not really much of a reason that a card would change into a human-like Nobody. Unless you can explain that, it makes no sense.

Honestly, I don't really see this profile as being fixable. I'd suggest just starting over from scratch.

~Denied~