Jet

[jetskye]

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General Character Information
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Character Name: Jet Skye
Character Age: 17
Character Gender: Male
Character Race: Human
Character Position: Neutral
Character Personality: A loud mouthed freak. He’s always surprised by the tiniest things and is always ready to have a fresh fight. Eager to meet new people, Jet likes to talk and is courageous when he needs to be.
Character's Appearance: img89.imageshack.us/img89/9884/sanosukeanimeid5.jpg

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Battle Information
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Weapon Name: Skye Blade
Weapon Appearance: img341.imageshack.us/img341/2461/iwsp4ww1.jpg
Abilities:

- Supernatural Sight : The ability that allows Jet to see through 1 minute into the future. This skill is rather used for strategy instead of offensive. [[Once per 3 Posts]]

- Skye Orion : The abilities only the Skye family has although Jet was capable of learning it. It improves Jet’s strength and attack speed threefold. He is only capable to use this ability after doing a good amount of damage to his opponent. [[Once per 10 Posts]]

- Final Will : This ability grants Jet to be able to multiply his power by five. Once he uses this ability, his power is limited and he loses his strength for the remaining of the battle.[[Once per Topic]]


Additional Abilities: [Abilities that you have bought/earned. This section is ONLY to be touched by staff upon you buying/earning an Additional Ability.]

Special Abilities: [Abilities that do not count toward your maximum total amount of Abilities. This section is only to be touched by staff.]

Summons: [Summons you own/bought.]

Items: [Items you have bought/earned. This section is only to be touched by staff.]
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Character History
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Plagued with a rare disease, Jet found himself gulping down medicine each day. This rare disease forced him to be uncapable of fighting or doing anything that involved physical contact. Desperate to overcome his disease, Jet and his family hired a special doctor to cure his disease. Uncapable of paying the medicine bills, the sickly doctor hired an hitman to get rid of the Jet’s family.

Jet watched his family be killed right before his eyes. Luckily, Jet survived and ran away. At the age of 13, he learned the ability Skye of Orion from Orion Skye. Jet followed in his footsteps as Orion took care of him like he was his own son. The death of Orion soon came and Jet found himself a wanderer once more. Finally, at the age of 17, A skilled blacksmith noticed Jet as he walked by. The blacksmith and exchanged words with Jet.

“Your master wanted me to give you this before you turned 18. He was going to give it to you himself, but he died unfortunately.” The skilled blacksmith explained.

“Thanks.” Jet replied with a tear in his eyes. Just as he grabbed the sword, Jet found himself in another world, filled with dark and mysterious creatures. After years of training with Orion, Jet was capable of defending himself from these creatures.
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Other
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Anything extra you want to add?

Nope.

[Zero [Axel]]

I'm not a character mod but I noticed a few things in this that need changed.

I. You're missing the discription of your character's appearace. You need to add on or a picture for it to be accepted.

II. The mods prefer if all images are in link form, not image forms.

III. You should add somthing pertaining to KH in your character's history. There seems to be a glimpse of what could be Heartless and Realm of Darkness but it's better to be specific just in case.

Overall, I think it's a good character.

[jetskye]

Thanks for your opinion. I'll change it right away. =]

[Zero [Axel]]

Gah, I'm sorry. I forgot one more thing >.<

You will need cooldown for abilities. If you don't know what a cooldown is, it's basically a limiter to your abilities so they arn't overused which could result in godmoding. You would need a 2 or 3 post cooldown, meaning after you use the ability, you have to wait 2 - 3 posts to reuse it.

[jetskye]

Oh alright, I got it. Thanks for mentioning it.

[Medy]

Could you host all of your images on ImageShack please? It's just a regulation to stop people from stealing other site's bandwidth.

Supernatural Reflexes
This is what we consider a 'duh' ability. Basically, it's assumed that characters can generally move faster and perform more acrobatic abilities than normal humans can. So, if you want him to generally be able to move faster, just slam it into the 'Other' section on your profile. You can then put another ability into that slot if you wish to.

Skye Orion
How much is his attack speed and strength increased by?

Final Will
If you're sure about having such a strong limit on the ability, then fine, but personally, I think it's rather strong for a simple increase in power.

[jetskye]

I edited it all and I changed the effect of "Final Will". ~.^

[Medy]

Approved, locked and moved

Enjoy role-playing.