Matt Tamxt

[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

Nothing's wrong with it, but there are some aspects that make no sense. First, your weapon. I...don't understand it at all. It's a turtle Nobody...what makes the 'weapon' any different from a summon? If the turtle can move around and attack of its own free will, then it's actually a summon, and must be changed.

Also, near the end of your history, you mentioned skeleton key wielding foes or something along those lines. If you're referring to keybladers, then that needs to be either clarified or changed, since there really are only four keybladers.

[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

I suppose it shouldn't be a problem, assuming some things are...clarified.

Lisa can go from 1 foot in size to 20 feet in size, her mouth opening up to 5 feet total in size.

That part is what really makes the turtle not seem like a weapon. Also, it's not exactly clear as to how the turtle is a weapon. When she's wrapped around his hand, does she act as a combination shield/blunt object?

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