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Post by ~/\The Dragon Writer/\~ on May 10, 2008 8:39:47 GMT -5
A few things.
First of all, you're going to have to change your weapon. The rules say one 'set', but with your transformations into different types of weapons, it's more than just a set of weapons. The arm-guard part should be fine, but please take out the other forms.
Second of all, your second ability can't have the multiple status effects. Take out one of them, and it should be fine.
Last, you're going to have to take the mentioning of canons out of your history and weapon description. You can't have canons mentioned in your character's back story, or related to the character's in any way, unless they're the history of another canon.
Just change those few things and everything should be fine.
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Post by dethkruzer on May 12, 2008 0:35:25 GMT -5
it´ll take a little while but i´ll modify it as soon as possible.
ps. DONE ;D
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Post by ~/\The Dragon Writer/\~ on May 12, 2008 17:19:39 GMT -5
Alright, it should be fine now.
~Accepted~
Locked and moved.
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