Vivi

[haiken]

Other Character(s)
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General Character Information
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Character Name: Vivi Orunitia
Character Age: 11
Character Gender: Male.
Character Race: [Human/Nobody/Heartless/Other

Character Position: [Good/Neutral/Evil]
Character Personality: Vivi, being only 11 years old, is very mature, and powerful for his young age. He gets encouraged very easily, and can conjure up just about any type of spell. Curaga, Blizara, anything.
Character's Appearance: upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/2/2d/Vivi_Ornitier_character.jpg

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Battle Information
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Weapon Name: Staff of Magick
Weapon Appearance: www.nightmarefactory.com/DG14433.jpg

Abilities:

• Curaga - This spell is simple. It fully heals anyone of your choice. (A team-mate, or yourself.) Can only use once per page. (Like, if the battle isn't more than a page long, you can only use it once. If it goes on to two pages, and you want to use it twice, like it says, once per page.)
  
  
  
• Shadow Portal - Vivi can use this portal to get anywhere he wishes in battle. Two post cooldown.
  
  
  
• Blinding Light - Using his staff, he emits a steam of blinding white light from the tip of his staff. This attack lasts one post if succesful.
  

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Character History
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Vivi used to be a member of Twilight Towns Disciplinary Committee led by Seifer, until the Nobodies and the Heartless came. There, he used his Magick Staff to ward them off, with the help of Roxas. Vivi was born through darkness, some say he is a Heartless himself, but in his heart, he knows he is not. He is simply a magic using being.

After the fight with the nobodies and heartless, Vivi decided to lay low for a while, to train his magic. He trained for about two years, which means at the time being, he is eleven. His magick is stronger than ever, and he is ready to fight whatever comes at him. His current objection is to help destroy those heartless in anyway possible. Even if it costs him his life.
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Sample Post

Vivi versus Roxas. Vivi was eager to kick this dudes ass, even though they were on the same side. Vivi had his staff ready, and was ready to win. Though, the only real attack Vivi has is hitting with the staff. Roxas was coming. Oblivion in the right hand, OathKeeper in the left. He was coming, and he was coming fast. Vivi decided he would NOT lose. No way in hell. He raised his staff and attempted to blind Roxas with his staff.
It worked.

Vivi clapped. He was happy it worked. Now, to end his plan, he t tried to use teleport. But Roxas wouldn't give up, he leaped in the air, and out of luck, landed a hit on Vivis chest. Vivi was hurt. He needed to get away, and fast. He backed up a little, and used Curaga. He sighed a little bit, and teleported behind Roxas. He went to strike him in the neck. It landed.

Vivi had no clue what to do. He had a little while longer to wait before he could use anything again. Then he had an idea. Since Roxas was already injured, he could just hit him more. So he tried. He went to attack in the back, but Roxas grabbed his Staff.

SHIT. He was fucked. But, luckily for him, Blinding Light was recharged. Since the tip of the staff was right becide Roxas' eyes, it would work wonders. Take that! As Vivi said this, blinding light had emited from the tip of his staff. Roxas cried in pain. He couldn't see. It was time for Vivi to end this.

He struck the final blow to Roxas' head. He fell back in pain, and was knocked out. Vivi had won.

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[atrum]

Ok as always, I can't bear to see FF canons done wrong so I'm going to have to intrude Dx. Vivi can not use Curaga.

Vivi = Black Mage
Curaga = White Magic

Other than that, all I have to say is the history is a little lacking.

[owaz]

Personality makes it seem like you're trying to sneak in other magic abilities in there, and white magic such as Curaga shouldn't be available to a Black Mage like Vivi. Also, your history is rather short for a paragraph and it appears to be entirely based off his role in Final Fantasy 9 rather than including anything about his purpose in Kingdom Hearts 2.

[Zero [Axel]]

I don't have any actual say in this but shouldn't those abilities have cool-downs? Ability two is teleporting, and ability 3 can be abused, I don't know if Curaga is going to be aloud but either way it too should have a cooldown.

[owaz]

Oh right, dangit I missed pointing those two out. But yeah Curaga won't be allowed for Vivi.

Shadow Portal - You'll need a 2 post cooldown for this.
Blinding Light - Four posts is too long for a person to just sit there being temporarily blinded. I say make it last for one post, and give it a 3 post cooldown.

[haiken]

The history part I can't change, theres no information about him on wiki, or the web, I've looked. That's about all I can figure out ,same with the magic. Curaga is on Kingdom Hearts, and last time I checked, there isn't a white or black magic on kingdom hearts. ;]


But, if it'll make you shut up, I'll change Curaga to "Heal". -_-U Just a name, ykno.


EDIT: Changing the history to Kingdom Hearts history. Now I can use Curaga, seeing as how theres not white/black magic in KH.
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[Admin]

Character History: needs to be beefed up.

Sample Post: needs to be redone. It is lacking the actual 'Vivi personality' department.

[zomgzamal]

There is black and white magic in Kingdom Hearts...its just called darkness and light. Riku uses both, Heartless uses darkness, and Sora uses light. >.> But here even wielders of the darkness can heal. Look at Marluxia, and those annoying flying green heartless that float around healing everyone.

>.> Sorry, I know I have no say here...but I couldn't resist jumping in with my two cents.

[haiken]

Modified.

Axel ! - So? Like you said, Riku uses both, and so does Vivi.

[Admin]

Your history is better. If it is enough, that is a whole different thing.

Also, your Sample is rather bland. Not a very good piece of RP quality.

[haiken]

Modified.

[Admin]

I suppose that is fine...>> (Even if I could do without the cursing.)

1/3 accepted. Please await 2 others to accept.

[jack]

Argh... I feel bad for my little Vivi when I see this, to begin with, shouldn't Vivi be able to conjure Fire? It being his first magical ability and all... Then there's the fact of age, and maturity, I don't think that would be very important seeing as he was manufactured by the evil Mist. But hey, that's just my opinion as a true Final Fantasy fan.

And Vivi doesn't even remotely think of cursing, he's extremely naive and very easily manipulated.

[haiken]

Well sorry Jack, this isn't the Vivi from FINAL FANTASY. This is the one from Kingdom Hearts.

[Admin]

Somethings have been called to my attention.

1) Since we take place after KH2, your age for Vivi is wrong.

2) Vivi never actually met Roxas. Fake Vivi, the one digitally made by DiZ, is the one that met Roxas. And well, you can't play as the Fake Vivi, so you'll have to change it.