Darkflames

[darkflames]

General Character Information
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Character Name:Darkflames
Character Age:16
Character Gender:male
Character Race:Human
Character Position:Neutral
Character Personality: Cool- When he acts cool he just lets things go kicks backs a little and has fun fighting, talking etc.
Anger- When he is angry it can turn into rage then he will sometimes start screaming, sometimes shouting, and he might destroy things. If he does not destroy things he will go out and find heartless to attack.
Quiet- When he is quiet he does not listen to anyone he will just ignore everyone and anything in his path. ]
Calm- When he is calm he becomes more understanding and is willing to listen to others.
Character's Appearance:He has a white shirt kind of wrinkled with the sleeves torn off.He has Black and red baggy pants but there stiched together. He has a Light bluish and blackish medium sized bracelet which is indestructable(used for special move). His hair is like rikus but Darkblue. He also has brownish blackish gloves.And he has Blood red eyes.
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Battle Information
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Weapon Names:Soul eater's Twin and Dark/Light blade
Weapon Appearance:
Soul eater's Twin(the bat wing like sword)- It looks different from the regular soul eater cause this one is completely all black and red. Instead of a eye in the middle its a ruby and the handle has Bandages around it.
Dark/Light Blade- This Blade was made from light and darkness. The light and the darkness are both swirled around the whole blade. So this sword has its own dark and light powers so darkflames does not have to use his own to power up his attacks with it and the handel has bandages around it which is holding all the power within the sword and if released it could destroy a whole city that is why the bandages will never come off.


Abilities: Data Drain- This move is used by his bracelet it charges a large beam from his hand. Then it charges 7 small beams the small beams are scatter beams which can be dodged but only if they are dodged correctly. This move is only super affective against people or things that use darkness. If used on a person who uses the light it will do less damage but still hurt the opponet.
Darkness /Lightness attacks- He has mastered both darknes and light so he can but darkness and light into any type of attacks of his.
teleport- He can teleport from world to world or in battles

Additional Abilities: [Abilities that you have bought/earned. This section is ONLY to be touched by staff upon you buying/earning an Additional Ability.]

Special Abilities: [Abilities that do not count toward your maximum total amount of Abilities. This section is only to be touched by staff.]

Items: [Items you have bought/earned. This section is only to be touched by staff.]
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Character History
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When darkflames was younger he wanted to travel all over his world to make new friends, to get stronger, and to learn new things. But one day that all changed when the heartless came. That is when darkflames world fell into darkness but darkflames woke up but in a realm of light and darkness. He then was looking around in the realm and that is when he found his to swords The Souleaters twin and the Dark/light blade. Then darkflames herd a voice and it said " Use thses to blades and find the chosen one who has the key and help him to save your world and all other worlds." From that day on Darkflames went out to find this person who had the "key". But darkflames did not know what this "key" was and to which world he should go to first to look for this person. So then from then on darkflames then was trying to use his light and dark powers to travel from world to world if he would not get totally drained from using the dark powers. So Darkflames then made a plan that he would stay at the world for a longer time and try to fight with his light powers since he would travel on using his dark powers. Then darkflames started to master his darkness, and light.

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[owaz]

Character denied for several reasons:

You need to work on grammar when posting a character profile. Both of your weapons aren't allowed because you basically copied Riku's sword and gave it a color change, while your other weapon isn't supposed to have high powered abilities either.

Your ability "Data Drain" needs to be better explained. And Dark/Light counts as two abilities, whilst your teleport ability (needs a two post cooldown if you keep it) adds up to a total of four abilities.

Fix all of this and your character might be accepted so long as there aren't any other problems.