Devlin [Modifying]

[devlin]

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~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure. [/center][/i]

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Username ~ : Devlin

Other characters ~ : None

Is this character canon? ~ : No

Link to canon thread ~ :

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

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Name ~ : Devlin

Age ~ : looks to be 20 -30

Birthplace ~ : Twilight Town

Birthday ~ :

Gender ~ : Male

Race ~ : Nobody

Special Class ~ :

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.

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Physical appearance ~ : He is tall and rather slender, about 7 foot. He has a pumpkin for a head which is very unusual because it cannot be crushed. The rest of his body is just a skeleton which almost seems to look as if it could fall apart at any moment because of the way it appears.

Clothing/Accessories ~ :

Devlin wears a coat that has ends that seem to almost hit the floor. It's color is black and white, like the rest of his outfit, and black buttons in the front with gloves that he adds to his hands. A huge scarf is wrapped around his neck which it practically touches the ground floor. He also wears black long slender pants to fit him along with books.

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.

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Alignment ~ : He stands as a neutral character. He doesn't quite understand why he seems to be having mixed emotions about the good side. But he is still heading to the Nobodies side of things. These emotions sometimes cause him to get lost in thought most of the time.

Behavior ~ : He speaks nobly, like a nobly servant to the master, to everyone. At times, he may seem too serious and in a deviant kind of mood. He acts more like a strategist when certain situations come along when thinking of a possible plan may occur. There are faint feeling that he feels,which may come from his other self, that he does not fully understand.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.

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Gloves

ID: His gloves can become claws at his own will in a fight, but there not a very serious attack. It depends on his agility when he swipes his glove claws at his opponents. Their color is white whit match his coat at the ends.

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.

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AP: 10

[Insert Ability One name here]: Fury Swipe
[Description of ability] An attack he uses with his gloves to claw at his enemies.

Strength: Weak
Uses: Passive

[Insert Ability Two name here]: Fire
[Description of ability] Magic that flashes out of his gloves to burn the enemies he faces. The shapes of the fire appear in waves which reach the size of 2'.

Strength: Weak
Uses: 10


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Special Abilities

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~History~

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.

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~Class~

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.

~ A sword of terrible destruction - The power of the warrior: Invincible courage.

~ A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.

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Mystic

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~Other~

[Put anything else you want to say about your character in here.]

[High's .Valentine.]

Well, a few things I want you to edit and clarify.

1. You said his head cannot be crushed, but he can still die, right?

2. Please state how many AP points you have left in the AP: section.

3. More description for Fire is needed. Describe the size and form of the fire. Do they come in waves? Balls? Pillars?

4. Who's Jack? If it is who I think it is [Jack Skellington], then we have a bit of a problem.

5. You are not allowed to include any interaction with the organization in your history. Canons are not allowed in an OC's history.

[High's .Valentine.]

Denied for now.

Since this has been sitting here for more than one week, it's automatically denied. When you feel like editing it, just PM me or Akito to have the thread moved back here and unlocked.