I. Xemnas: The Superior

[Shinn]

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Username: Shinn
Gender: Male

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Audition Thread: Xemnas
Canon Challenge: No
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Name: Xemnas

Alias: The Superior

Age: Unknown
Gender: Male

Race: Nobody

Alignment: Villain

Origin: It is unknown where Xemnas was originally from but when he was Xehanort he lived un Radiant Garden. Once he became Xemnas though he was reborn in Twilight Town like all Nobodies.
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Appearance:

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Physical Features: Xemnas has a strong athletic body build especially for someone who is a scientist. But being the leader of an organization that consists of incredibly strong beings it’s not surprising that he has a well-built figure. It’s an above average muscular body, but not over the top like Lexaeus or Xaldin or thin such as Zexion or Vexen. Xemnas stands at an above average height then most of the other members except Lexaeus but is still tall compared to most adult males. Xemnas is a dark skinned Nobody with long silver hair combed back with long bangs that come down on both sides of his face. One area of his hair seems to gather and spike up in one direction while the rest either spikes back or combs down.

Facial Features: Xemnas has an attractive, masculine facial feature with a nice brown tan skin and a V shaped hairline. His eyes are a devilishly yellow color.

Clothing: He wears the uniform of the Thirteenth Order which is a black leather hooded cloak that goes down to about his ankles. The hood is adorned with a silver zipper and decorated silver beaded pull strings for the hood that come down in the middle and at the end of his sleeves they are bell shaped. It’s unknown what kind of undergarments are under the cloak, the only thing seen other than the cloak is pair of black pants and knee high silver trimmed boots. Xemnas also wears black leather gloves. The hood itself is able to cast a shadow that covers his entire face and upper neck.

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Personality:

Resolve: Although it is assumed that all Nobodies desire to have a heart thus making them whole once again, for Xemnas that is simply not the case. He desires nothing but ultimate knowledge and power that rivals what some would call divine. This to Xemnas is how a Nobody no anyone is truly whole. To become an eternal being is his one true desire.

Pursuit: The reason as to why Xemnas continues to push forward in order to achieve this seemingly impossible goal is because he sees this as his divine right as a Nobody. If he is a being of Nothingness and Nothingness is eternal then he believes that he himself should become eternal seeing as he is Nothingness himself.

Fears: A nobody does not have or should not have the ability to feel fear since it is an emotion of the heart which they do not have. Even death does not scare Xemnas since he has already conquered death as well. If there was one thing that he would fear it’s that all of his life’s work were to lead him to nowhere.

Hopes: Xemnas hopes to become that which no human, Heartless or Nobody has ever achieved ,infinite existence. Basically to become a god is what Xemnas hope to become.

Hobbies: While the other members are off doing missions or plotting to overthrow him Xemnas spends his spare time gazing at his Kingdom Hearts his single most important masterpiece and sometimes even speaking to it as if it were a living being. When he isn’t doing that he visits Radiant Garden specifically the Room of Sleep which is hidden in Ansems old laboratory deep underground. It is there he spends many hours in solitude although one can hear him speaking to someone in the room whom he refers to as a old friend.

Public Personality/Private Personality:
In public Xemnas fulfills his role as the Superior of Organization XIII. He is strong and very authorative when around the other members never showing a sign of weakness at any time. When around other people such as Sora and co. Xemnas has a calm, collective attitude making it easier to manipulate those who have hearts and having no heart he is able to be rational and think things through instead of acting on impulse. Even when his way of thinking is challenged Xemnas can keep a cool attitude and not go off the deep end unlike his fellow members. He simply smirks and does away with such nonsense. When he speaks to others Xemnas tends to drag on words to give his empty words some kind of emotion that he himself cannot give. He will also make various arm and hand gestures to show others what kind of expression he wants to give out.

In private Xemnas seems to change somewhat especially when he is alone in the Room of Sleep. There he seems to be somewhat mournful and seems to express a lingering sorrow over someone or something lost. Is it his heart? His past? Whatever the case my be when alone Xemnas seems to take a very long time almost going for days just in deep thought. When he is alone with his Kingdom Hearts Xemnas shows a side that seems to make him look as though he has feelings but this is not the case. He merely does this to look overdramatic over the only thing that has meaning to him.


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Class: Warrior

Weapons:

Weapon Name: Aerial Blades

Weapon Description: They are two red beam saber-like weapons that form in his hands. They are about four feet in length and are mainly used to deal damage to opponents with multiple strikes.

Unique Notes: These blades are created through the sheer willpower of Xemnas and the power of Nothingness. They can never break or shut down unless Xemnas chooses not to use them. They cannot cut through flesh like most light sabers are known to easily do but with enough force its best to stay out of the way.


Abilities:


Base Ability: The Power of Nothingness

Sub Abilities:

Invitation to Nothingness: This ability is one of Xemnas specialties. Here his opponent is surrounded by three clear crystals with the Nobody symbol in the center of the crystals that appear out of thin air around the opponent one at a time and are linked together by a chain of black and white energy, circling around them slowly draining their life until they eventually die. The spell will linger on for eight posts and after the eighth post the opponent will die. What it does is it starts to send out small shocks of energy at the opponent which drains their life away, the longer this goes on the faster it begins to drain the opponents life away. The attack can be evaded if they manage to not get caught inside the ring of energy but cannot be blocked if it comes in contact with someone. If the attack touches you but you still managed to evade being in the circle, the spell will automatically initiate. The only way to remove the spell is for the opponent to stand still for one full turn thus ending the spell. And by stand still their character cannot move at all for one full turn. The reason for this is because the spell is a motion sensor-like device, if they make any type of movement the spell will continue to linger there until the opponent does not move or dies. It's basically like playing possum. If they are successful Xemnas must wait four turns before he is able to use it again.

Barrier: Barrier creates a transparent image of a crystalline square in front of Xemnas, (or whichever direction he wishes) about three feet from where he is. The barrier is about seven feet in length and three feet in width. While it is in effect it lingers there for a brief moment in the spot where it appeared not moving anywhere else. During that time any attack used on him will be bounced back at whoever attacked. Projectile weapons are also bounced back at their sender, but in the case of physical attacks it is only the pure force that strikes back on an opponent. As long as it is there it cannot be shattered or removed no matter how many times it is hit until the spell is worn out. This ability lasts for one posts with a cool down of one post.

Beam blasts: Xemnas can fire multiple blasts of thin yellow beams similar to his aerial blades only slightly smaller that appear out of thin air in any area within a 20 yard radius at an opponent(s) at rapid speeds. The manner in how he does changes depending on the situation it could be circling his prey surrounding them in a ring of a dozen beams, then firing them all one at a time, Xemnas can fire in any direction the opponent is at any time even if they move out of the circle. Xemnas can also line them up and fire them one at a time.


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Physical Attack: 2
Physical Defense: 2
Magical Attack: 2
Magical Defense: 2
Reflexes: 2
Speed: 3
Awareness: 3

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History:

Xemnas was born after Ansem the Wises apprentice Xehanort who had been found by Ansem with no memories of who he was, gave his heart to darkness to have a better understanding of the heart. Xemnas like all Nobodies was then reborn in Twilight Town. He chose the name Xemnas that is an anagram of Ansem since because Xehanort took on the name of Ansem his mentor while studying the heart and the darkness within it. Sometime during that he would later join up with former apprentices of Ansem the Wise and create their organization. They soon created their base of operations in The World that Never Was in a large white castle right in the center of the dark city. Not much is heard from them again although during this time the organization recruited 7 more members to their group and acquired control of Castle Oblivion. Every once in a while Xemnas would secretly go into a secret room hidden in Hollow Bastion called the Room of Sleep where he talks to someone. It is unknown who he is talking to, only that he refers to them as his "old friend".

Xemnas would make his first appearance to Sora right after his fight with Maleficent. He at first says absolutely nothing hiding his face under his hood and passes through Sora, causing him to experience many of his memories in rapid succession. Sora and the others then ask if he is Ansem in which he responds though some sort of telekinesis, he is familiar with the name but doesn't answer that he is Ansem. Xemnas then launches an energy attack at Sora, who manages to deflect it. Xemnas beings to say how Sora looks just like "him", and that Sora is not complete, but this only confuses Sora. Xemnas decides to test Soras ability and attacks him. After testing Sora he is fascinated at the young Keyblade wielder and leaves, telling him that they will encounter each other again. He them mentions to Sora that he is nothing but a mere shell.

After the events in Castle Oblivion a year later Xemnas appears again in Hollow Bastion as he and the remaining Organization XIII members appear with their faces hidden under their hoods taunting Sora. Sora doesn't recognize Xemnas or the organization since Namine tampered his memories in Castle Oblivion. Xemnas then leaves and from then until their next encounter stays in the castle that never was giving orders to the other members to keep Sora on track.

Xemnas is not seen again until the Heartless invasion in the Great Maw. King Mickey, upon seeing his face, immediately remembers just whose Nobody Xemnas is it is none other than Xehanort, the apprentice of Ansem the Wise. He confirms this saying how long it had been since he abandoned is human identity. Xemnas then runs off, and King Mickey gives chase.

After an exhausting battle with the thousand Heartless, the three heroes make their way to the cliff overlooking Villain's Vale, finally catching up with Mickey. Sora demands to know where Riku and Kairi are. Xemnas claims to know nothing of any Kairi, but as for Riku, Xemnas tells Sora to ask the king. Then, he vanishes into a corridor of darkness, with Mickey jumping in right after him vanishing as well.


After all of the other organization members who were in the castle had been eliminated by Sora, Xemnas comes to greet Ansem the Wise, who had been attempting to digitally seal Kingdom Hearts away. Xemnas mocks his former teacher, telling him that Ansem is the source of all Heartless because he inspired him to go where Ansem himself did not dare to venture. Though Ansem admits that his foolishness was the source of this, he questions Xemnas if this is what he was seeking. Xemnas then reveals his plans about using the Keyblade wielders to defeat the Heartless and release the captive hearts and gather them to form his Kingdom Heats and create a brand new world, one heart at a time. He tells Xemnas that he will fail and so will his new world. Ansem then says his goodbyes to the King and Riku just before the machine Ansem had been using explodes. Xemnas retreats just as the bright light envelops the area. The explosion causes severe damage to Kingdom Hearts, causing countless hearts to rain down upon the world, which would transform into Heartless as they touched the ground.

Xemnas laments over the damage done to his Kingdom Hearts. He asks the three Keyblade wielders to fetch him more hearts. Of course they refuse this demand. He then asks why they “hate the darkness” to which King Mickey responds that they don't hate the darkness, but just that it's "scary". Riku adds that it is because of what's is lurking inside that darkness. Xemnas then asks, “if they accept the darkness, yet live in light, why do they loathe those who are nothing, who have been turned away from both the darkness and the light?” Riku answers that it's because they endangered the worlds, which Xemnas tries to justify those actions with the fact that they had no other choice. However, Sora does not believe this, stating they had no remorse over the actions anyway. Xemnas chuckles, stating that it's true, and proceeds to face Sora one on one in an arena of nothingness, with Memory's Skyscraper towering above them.

After the fight Xemnas retreats to his destroyed Kingdom Hearts and begins to absorb the remaining power within it. Sora and the others attempt to stop him but are too late as the Kingdom Hearts absorbs Xemnas and he vanishes. A door appears and Sora, Riku, and the king use their Keyblades to open the door and enter the Kingdom Hearts to further pursue Xemnas. They enter to see that Xemnas has created a realm similar to The World That Never Was. Xemnas tells them their hearts have led them to their deaths, saying that it may not be worth following one's heart, and takes note of it, before hurling a building at them.

After he is defeated Xemnas stands there beaten and bruised thinking that he needs more hearts and more rage. Sora tells him that hearts are more than just anger or hate, that there are all kinds of feelings and asks if he remembers, sadly Xemnas says that he doesn't and vanishes appearing to have finally been defeated.

A little while later after Kairi, Mickey, Donald, and Goofy are transported back to safety on Destiny Islands, Sora and Riku are interrupted by Xemnas who has merged with a gigantic mechanical dragon Nobody. Sora and Riku hop on a hover cycle and begin fighting the mechanized monster. After defeating it, it slowly vanishes into oblivion. Not yet defeated, Xemnas takes Sora and Riku to a realm of nothingness, with Xemnas wearing a black and white robe that represented both light and darkness. He says that if both light and darkness are eternal, then so too must be nothingness. Riku and Sora tell him this might true, but not Xemnas. The three warriors then share a very intense battle, with Xemnas wounding both Sora and Riku with various attacks. Xemnas disarms Sora and goes in for the kill but Riku intervenes. Riku is badly injured during the fight, so Sora batters Xemnas into submission with Riku's Keyblade. Sora and Riku then finish him off by blasting Xemnas with a beam of light from the Keyblade. Xemnas fades into darkness never to be seen again.


Or so it seems.

Xemnas strong will along with the immense power of his Kingdom Hearts that had fused with him begins to slowly gather and is able to rejuvenate and bring him back to life. From there it is unknown what he plans on doing.
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[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

There's only one thing that really needs to be changed. The first ability is impossible to avoid, and that's not allowed. While you supplied a decent form of getting out of it, it's still an unavoidable move. Either change it to make it unavoidable, or change it completely.

[Zero [Axel]]

For the second ability, the shield can't be unbreakable. The only way I would allow this ability would be if you made the barrier stationary and if it only covered a 6x6-8x8 foot area. Change please.

[Shinn]

Done and Done.

[Zero [Axel]]

The only problems I still see is the whole 'your character has to stand still for one full post to stop the spell' for your first sub ability. It's basically a WTF moment. Try having it make a little more sense.

And put in more detail how the three crystals appear. They must also be stationary if the only way to avoid the attack is to evade.

[Shinn]

There done and done.

[Zero [Axel]]

Thanks for being cooperative. Everything looks good.

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