Sai Eiserne

[Konaa]

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Username: Konaa

Gender: Male

Other Character(s): khrpffinalmix.proboards79.com/index.cgi?board=cchain&action=display&thread=2649

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Name: Sai Eiserne

Alias:

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Race: Human...though some have their doubts.

Alignment: Hero...sorta.

Origin: Alakaid (now destroyed)
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Appearance:

Physical Features: Sai stands tall, with a somewhat muscular build. His fighting style resolves around the spirit, so he's not as muscular as most martial artists would be.

Facial Features: Sai's eyes are large and a glaring ice-blue. His hair is jet black and falls past his shoulders.

Clothing: A black shirt is visible underneath the green martial arts outfit he traditionally wears. Around his head is a green bandanna.

Miscellaneous Items/Articles:

Personality:

Resolve: The driving force in Sai Eiserne's life is the eradication of the evil, the tyrannical, the greedy, the selfish...I could go on. In short, he travels randomly in hopes of stumbling upon evil of any kind and destroying it completely.

Pursuit: After the Heartless destroyed his homeworld Alakaid, the only thing left for Sai is fighting. And his chosen opponent will always be the forces of evil. It is vengeance and justice he fights for.

Fears: Seeing another tragedy such as the destruction of his homeworld.

Hopes: To be honest, he has no hopes for the future. He has no view, except for what is right in front of him.

Hobbies: He enjoys training his body and spirit.

Public Personality/Private Personality: In public, Sai is cold, blunt, and withdrawn. People only have to see his hard eyes and witness his brutal fighting style to be intimidated by this fearsome teen. Even the knowledge that he is not a servant of evil doesn't make him any less scary. He works with no authority but his own, and rarely teams up. In private, he is more or less the same, except there's no one to glare at, so he relaxes a bit.

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Class: Warrior

Weapons:

Weapon Name: Spirit Fists

Weapon Description: You know...five fingers, attached to the arm? Ring any bells? Oh...and he channels his spiritual force through them, meaning his punches will be WAY harder then an average human's.

Abilities:

Base Ability: Shura Fist A fighting style that involves channeling ones own spiritual force to fight. Very little ranged evocation, to be blunt this fighting style resolves around closing the distance and beating the crap out of your opponent. When one begins fighting an aura of blue-white energy appears around the fighter, made of his spiritual power.

Sub Abilities:
-Gathering the might of his spirit to him, Sai's fists take on an extreme speed and when in close range, he can launch a blinding flurry of rapid punches, striking the enemy eight times. Using this ability twice in a short amount of time will tire him out immediately after the eighth blow is launched.
-Focusing his spiritual energy to give him strength, Sai can gather his aura to his arms and punch with considerable more force then before. However, his other body parts will not function as efficiently while this is active.
-Sai's most advanced technique. He can form his aura into a blast of energy in a lion's shape. It is not accurate, however, and best fired at a close range. This will leave him tired for a couple of turns while his aura returns to him.

Items:
Equips:

Distribution Points:

Physical Attack: 5
Physical Defense: 2
Magical Attack: 1
Magical Defense: 1
Reflexes: 2
Speed: 3
Awareness: 2

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History: Born in Alakaid, a mostly plain-filled world, Sai was training to be a martial artist since the age of three. His people worshiped the essence of a person's spiritual aura, believing it to be a gift from the gods. upon the age of fourteen he graduated from his training to become a full fledged martial artist within Alakaid's society. Unfortunately, three months afterwards was when the heartless arrived. The world did not fall easily, being a world of martial artists. However, the black tide overwhelmed them, and Sai saw his family and friends killed. Only pure luck spared him of the same fate, he was drawn into the nexus they emerged from, ending up in Traverse Town. Since then, the warrior has traveled the worlds, fighting the forces of evil, protecting those who cannot protect themselves, and generally kicking ass.
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Anything else you want to say about yourself or your character?

[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

Your first ability is the only thing that needs to be changed. You said the attacks come super fast, but you didn't say how many, how long, or anything else about it really.

[Konaa]

Kay, edited. how's that?

[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

Alright, it should be fine.

~Accepted~

Locked and moved.