Mitsuomi Jin

[gouki]

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Username: Akuma

Gender: Male

Other Character(s): None
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Only applicable to canons.

Audition Thread:
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Name: Mitsuomi Jin

Alias: Golden Fists

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Alignment: Light

Origin: No one knows where Jin is from. He has never mentioned where he came from or anything. He just travels from world to world always on the move. (I'm keeping that a secret until his story is explained more).
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Appearance:

Physical Features: Jin is a about 6' 9" tall with a very powerful upper and lower body body structure. He makes normal body builders look like twigs. His feet and hands are also abnormally bigger than most normal people but then again when you look at some of the characters in the Kingdom Hearts universe it's quite normal. He has numerous scars all around his body due to being in dozens of fights in his life.

Facial Features: Jin had a very boxed shaped facial structure. A rough square chin structure that has some facial hair growing. Thick dark eyebrows and short spiked hair. But don't think he is some kind of cave man looking person. He has very gentle brown eyes and a calm and cool facial expression.


Clothing: Jin wears a black suit with a white button up collared shirt and black tie with the kanji symbol for "Warrior". Similar attire to what you see the Turks wear. He wears a gold necklace with a pair of gold boxing gloves hanging from it. During fights Jin wears a pair of brown leather, fingerless sparring gloves.

Miscellaneous Items/Articles:
Jin drives around in a black Mitsubishi Lancer EVO X in certain worlds.

Personality:

Resolve:
He just wishes to become a great martial artist and use his fists for self-perfection. Martial arts teaches him and helps him become a better person and becoming a great martial artist means he becomes a great person.

Fears:
Jin is actually afraid of tight dark spaces. When he was little he was stuck inside a coffin for a week and ever since then he has always hated dark confined spaces.

Hopes:
To go against the strongest fighters in the universe. In each fight Jin learns something new every time whether he wins or lose. He just wishes to fight against warriors that are worthy of fighting him.
Hobbies:
Even though Jin is a born fighter he likes to enjoy the finer things in life. Going to a club, drinking, partying, as well as participating in street races, overall just having a good time. But he makes sure he is a disciplined person. Jin spends alot of his time training himself to perfect his skills.

Public Personality/Private Personality:

In public he is a very quiet person only speaking when spoken to giving out a creepy muscular man persona. Once you get to know him better though you'll find he's a gentle giant type of person. You'd be curious as to how someone as nice has Jin can go around and get into fights. The only time he will be serious is in a fight, and serious moments where joking around and being funny isn't needed.

Privately he is solely fixated on training his mind, heart, and body. These alone times are where he is most serious. He doesn't kid around and focuses on the road ahead. He also will be quite depressed when alone having his past haunt him from time to time. But this gives him the push he needs to train harder.
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Class: Warrior

Weapons: He has none, Jin uses his fists as weapons. His fists are strong enough to crack titanium with ease. Strong enough to shatter a diamond even.


Abilities:

Base Ability: Art of Fighting (it's a pun just so you know)

Sub Abilities:

Zetsuboryu technique #11 - Fists that crumble mountains.

Using the power of his martial arts Jin is able to pinpoint his opponents weak areas and strike them weakening them. Even if they are clad in armor Jin is able to strike all weak areas causing the armor to either immobilize whoever is wearing it, or cause it to fall off of the person wearing it. It all depends on where he strikes them.

Zetsuboryu technique # 13 - The soul becomes ignited.

Jin can concentrate his spiritual energy into his fists giving it a physical appearance of flames. When his hand is covered in these flames he can either keep it concentrated into his fists or fire it a a burst of energy. The burst itself only goes as far as 12 feet from where Jin is directing it at and is about 12 feet tall. Although it will not damage them physically it will severely damage their soul. The energy is so intense and strong that it literally burns the soul in a person even more than the flames of Hell. If an opponent is hit by this attack four times their soul will perish. Each time Jin uses this attack he must a cooldown of three posts before he can use it again.

Zetsuboryu Technique # 7- Heart, Body and Soul become one with the heavens.

A special state of mind Jin gets into during a battle where he is able to sharpen his awareness of his surroundings within a 1 mile radius around him making him able to easily perceive and evade various oncoming attacks thrown at him. It lasts for about 8 posts total and is a one time use per battle.

Items:

Equips:

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History: The Story of Jin

It is unknown where he was born or where exactly he came from. Jin sort of just appeared as if out of thin air one day in the Land of Dragons as a young man around the age of 14. He was found by a wandering monk who was once a champion fighter but took a vow never to fight for any reason other than self discipline and who had the ability of interstellar travel. He helped raise and teach the young Jin in the way of the fist as his student and adopted son. For years Jin and his master traveled to various worlds training to fight different kinds of opponents under different types of environments and settings. His master also taught him about humans and how they are made up of the Heart, Body and Soul. He began to learn alot about the worlds and how each were once all part of one single world.

Then one day Jin woke up in the middle of the night with blood stained hands and the lifeless body of his master lying in front of him beaten to a pulp. He instantly blamed himself for the murder of his master vowing to never use his fists to fight again.

After that he settled in Hollow Bastion and helped to build and set up various item synthesis shops for Moggles around the Kingdom Hearts universe. He also had a hand in the restoration of Hollow Bastion. He left shortly after that to travel to his masters resting place. There he saw that the shrine where his master was buried under had been burned to the ground. It was then he began to rethink about that night and began seeing visions of another person there. He couldn't make out exactly who this person was other than the clothes they were wearing which was a black version of the gi his master wore and the symbol of their school ripped off.

It was then Jin decided to go on a search to find the mysterious fighter and take revenge. During that time he would train himself and get into various fights in order to prepare himself for his encounter with the enigmatic warrior.

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[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

Your personality is missing. You need to add that in before I'll even think about modding it.

[gouki]

Whoops sorry I don't know how I missed that. I fixed it though.

[Medy]

Zetsuboryu technique # 13 - The soul becomes ignited.

Jin can concentrate his spiritual energy into his fists giving it a physical appearance of flames. With this he can fire out a burst of energy strong enough to kill an opponent. Although it will not damage them physically it will destroy their soul. The energy is so intense and strong that it literally burns the soul in a person even more than the flames of Hell. One time use in a battle.

I have a couple of issues with this, mainly because of the fact that it's a one-hit KO. Is this an attack that can be avoided, or just one that targets at the opponent and locks onto them? Because of how powerful the technique is, I'd like you to clearly specify that there is a way of evading it.

I'd also like you to bear in mind that there may be characters on this forum without souls, so this attack could be useless in some situations.

Zetsuboryu Technique # 7- Heart, Body and Soul become one with the heavens.

A special state of mind Jin gets into during a battle where he is able to sharpen his awareness of his surroundings within a 20 mile radius around him making him able to easily percieve and evade oncoming attacks thrown at him. It lasts for about 8 posts and is a one time use per battle.

8 posts is a seriously long time in a battle, unless you're referring to it being 4 of your turns and 4 of your opponent's turns. Could you specify whether it lasts for 8 of your turns or the alternative that I just described?

[kempff]

I'm seconding Medy's position on both attacks.

Technique #7....20 mile radius? Isn't that overkill? Or do you have something else in mind for this technique down the road?

Technique #13, same thing with Medy, except could you explain how this effects all three different alignments and curve its damage? The soul should be different for all three alignments and the damage process in someway not the same.

Technique #11, this is the only technique you have that really seems way over-done all around. A one hit immobilization technique where you instantly know where weaknesses are on an opponent? What if you're fighting in the dark or blindfolded? Or if they have no exposed weak-spots? There are too many technicalities, but this has potential if you bring it down in terms of power.

[gouki]

I modified it. The 8 posts is 8 post altogether so it would be four from each of us. It's 20 miles for various reasons.

technique #13 doesn't really have any specific affects to any alignment if you have a soul whether it's good, bad, neutral, warrior, mage, defender, it will do the same damage.

tequnique #11 all I can say is if it's dark or he is blindfolded then the technique is virtually useless. If they have no exposed weaknesses then it wouldn't work either. But they had better go into detail as to how they have none.

[Memories]

Since this has been lying in the dust for awhile I'll give my final moderation to this:

-ANYTHING that has kill in this you must remove. Your character cannot be so powerful that he can kill an opponent. Yes, you are allowed to kill people here, but you may not have instant death attacks. The second sub may have the effect of a piece of someone's soul being broken for the remainder of the battle. That will give them less stamina to throw around, but it still needs to have faults, which make it possible to dodge or out-maneuver. Something like that.

-Third sub. Okay I'm going to give it to you straight. Super-awareness for a 20 mile radius is ridiculous. No one in this RP has the ability to attack you from a distance that far away. There are no ICBM's in KH that will attack you from far away. Twenty miles is a HUGE distance if you really think about. The most anyone has ever allowed for a mass area effect ability is about a mile. That is all you will ever need. Just trust me on this one.

-I'll state it once again. Add faults and openings in your subs. You cannot be a god-like character. If you think that you will not be powerful enough to handle everything that comes your way then think again. As long as you think of ways to outsmart your opponent and stay on top of things you will never die. I do not believe anyone on the history of the site has died yet so the odds are in your favor. The only way I can imagine you dying is if you are fighting in an arena death-match battle, or you are surrounded by enemies and cannot think of a way of saving yourself from doom. In short, as long as you are not an idiot and waste your strength you will live. I don't know what else to say. Just fix your subs and I'll accept this and you can finally role-play.

[gouki]

Modified it. Is there anything else that I need to change?

[Memories]

Nope you are finally a-okay to go. The subs are reasonable, and everything else is fine I believe. So....

Locked, Moved, Whatever