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Post by upsilon on Sept 10, 2008 21:46:02 GMT -5
P.S. Since I can't edit my last post due to page loading issues I'll let you know what Dimensional Rift did in FFTA-2 before Trap butchered it into mthis and told me to use it.
Dimensional Rift- Rips apart the fabric of space and time to deal damage in an area. Damage done to each target is equal to 75% of said target's hp.
Figure a way to get that into the rpg if you want to, it's basically a super powered area version of Graviga.
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Post by Admin on Sept 10, 2008 21:56:12 GMT -5
Refusing to do as your told and threatening staff and being somewhat rude would get you banned on most forums. Watch it.
Dimensional Rift was asked to be modified because it was inescapable and undodgeable (both of which is against the rules). In addition, it protected you from all damage and bypassed defenses, which both constitute each of their own Subs, so you had a Sub with multiple Subs within it, which is---again---against the rules.
At this point, the Sub is much better. However, allow me to remind you that Subs that cancel out other magics are banned from the forum, so the part where it bypasses magical defenses is illegal.
Also, about your Hypochondria: We have a limit on status effect Abilities, which Medy didn't notice. Please edit into the 2-3 turn limit that is explained in the rules. And yes, I realize it isn't magic, but that doesn't make it devoid of the limit.
In general, you may want to go look at the Rules again. At the very least, go read over the part that describes what type of abilities are not allowed here and their limitations in general.
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Post by upsilon on Sept 11, 2008 8:33:15 GMT -5
It's completely edited on EVERYTHING GREY SAID. Now I don't think there CAN be anything else I HAVE to address because I did specifically what he said, unless you can find anything else wrong with it Medy.
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Post by Memories on Sept 11, 2008 20:33:30 GMT -5
I will let Medy finish moderating this, but a word of warning. If you insult and belittle the staff one more time I will make sure you are punished to the highest extent. In the general rules it states that you must respect the staff. Don't come here being a little prick. Tempest, most definetly feels the same way, and probably more so than myself. Learn to accept criticism and find out how to fix things. That's all I will say on that.
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Post by upsilon on Sept 11, 2008 20:59:31 GMT -5
*Deep breathing* Thank you for your correction oh great Memoir! I've inevitably learned my lesson and I'm so sorry! Will you ever forgive me? Please do.
Oh great super mod of KHRPF [FM], what would we do without your infinite knowledge and wisdom, who am I as a lowly member to speak out against the staff. Please accept my humble apology, I meant no harm by my poor choice of words.
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Post by Memories on Sept 12, 2008 17:22:10 GMT -5
Alright then here's what I will do. One more smart remark and you will be banned. If you can't be respectful to us then you have no right to be here. Should it be on the C-box or the forums I'm going to keep a vigilant eye on you.
Anyway the third sub still needs a few more minor corrections. Omit the part where it says it destroys the entire battlefield since that directly contradicts the 30 meter radius bit. You also said meters twice in a row.
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Post by upsilon on Sept 12, 2008 21:35:56 GMT -5
You can watch all you want eagle eye. If it weren't for miss Whitesong I'd remark to my hearts content, but she implores me not to get banned so if only for her, I will not stoop to your level to return your insults.
I've edited everything. If it's not perfect now, I don't know what else I could possibly do.
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Post by Admin on Sept 13, 2008 12:25:10 GMT -5
One more smart remark and you will be banned. Agreed. Accepted. Locked and moved. |
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I did post in shades of grey if anyone even remembers that lmao