Sadao Hiroshi

[dalmor01]

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~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure. [/center][/i]

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Username:Dalmor01

Other characters:None

Is this character canon?:No

Link to canon thread:N/A

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

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Name: Sadao Hiroshi

Age: 17

Birthplace:Radiant Garden

Birthday: 1/16

Gender:Male

Race:Nobody

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.

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Physical appearance: i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee112/defalj2331/sadao.jpg
Sadao is about 6'0", has hazel eyes, and has aqua-marinish hair. Most of the time, he wears a light black jacket, with a white undershirt that has several buttons undone. He has tannish skin, and the Nobody mark on his right forearm. His hair is usually semi-messy, because he hates to comb it to make it look neat. Also, he wears a glove on one of his hands, because without it, he has a good chance of dying in the future.

Clothing/Accessories: He wears a white glove on his right hand, in order to protect his hand from his icicle shot ability. Without the glove, the ability would cause damage to his hand, eventually causing extreme frostbite, rendering his hand useless, meaning he can no longer use the ability. The white glove has the Nobody symbol on it.
i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee112/defalj2331/whiteglove.jpg

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.

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Alignment: Twilight (Helps both sides)

Behavior: Sadao is very happy, and also very smart. he is a tactician, able to come up with answers very quickly. He loves making friends, and is very open about himself. He also very chivalrous, sweet talking the ladies. Sadao also is a little bit of a troublemaker. He has a hard time realizing when he should keep his mouth shut, when he should be sensitive when others are hurt emotionally, and when to put others down to make them stronger.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.

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Weapon(s): Icicle sword x2 i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee112/defalj2331/icesword.jpg

Sadao carries two swords, made of extremely strong material. The hilts of the swords are made of mythril, giving them a bluish color, and also each have a saphire gem within the hilt. The blades of the swords are made of a special type of of indestructible ice, which causes a drop in temperature when swung. Also, each sword has an empty slot in the blade, signifying that something could be put in to increase its power, though what the objects are is unknown.

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.

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[Ability One]: Icicle Shot
Strength:Weak
Uses: Sadao put his hand out, and icicles shoot our of his hand at enemies.

[Ability Two]: Icy Mist
Strength:Weak
Uses: A thick, freezing cold mist fills the area, making hard to see. The icy temperatures make it harder to battle.

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~History~

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.

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Sadao doesn't remember much about his past. Of what he does remember, he started out in a white castle. Everything seemed peaceful, until a hoard of heartless showed up, and began chasing him, as if he had something they wanted. He tried to fight them off, though there were too many. As he dashed through the castle, he called out for someone, though the name he could not remember. He ran up, stair after stair, from floor to floor, as the viscious heartless continued to come after him like a pack of hungry wolves. He kept running, until he bumped into a strange man, who seemed eerily familiar. He looked up in fear, as the man walked forward, slashing down the heartless, like they were nothing. He turned back to Sadao, and picked him up by his shirt, letting him go them, so Sadao was on his feet. Sadao brushed himself off, and was about to thank the man, when all of a sudden the mystery guy pierced right through him with his sword, causing Sadao to disappear. The next thing Sadao knew, he was wandering the dark, and a tunnel, showing the Radiant Garden streets appeared. He walked towards it, and ended up in Radiant Garden, where he is right now.

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~Extra~

Before you embark on your journey, you see three weapons in front of you.
~ A sword (Chosen)
~ A shield (Discarded)
~ A staff(Discarded)
Choose wisely.

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[Memories]

Alright we have a lot to go over by the looks of it. Let's begin...First off, get rid of the image tags. If you choose to put images in your profile, they must be URLs only.

Secondly, you must describe your weapon and appearance in a few brief sentences. While it is perfectly acceptable to place an image in your profile, you still have to provide a good description. The minimum is about two or three sentences.

Next is your Behavior. In total you have four sentences. The bare minimum is five. I do, however, encourage more creativity when developing your personality, but that's entirely your choice.

Going further down the list we have your abilities. Your strength is not the elemental type, but rather the actual strength of your ability. All abilities start out at Weak. When you roleplay and acquire munny these can be upgraded to Medium and then Strong soon after.

Now the final part: the history. It is a rule that you cannot interact with canon characters (FF gang as you say) without getting the consent of their owners, which is actually impossible at this point. I would suggest replacing them with a group of your own NPCs. This avoids the whole canon character mess and gives you inspiration for any future characters that you want to create. It is worthy to mention that you should not refer to the canon residents of Hollow Bastion as the "Final Fantasy gang." They are actual characters in this universe rather than the title of their franchise.

Make the proper edits and I will be back soon to review this once more.

[dalmor01]

Alright, i made the proper edits

[Memories]

You forgot to put in a few sentences to describe your physical appearance apart from your clothing and accessories. Just describe your height and a few distinguishing facial features. After that you are done.

[dalmor01]

fixed once more

[Memories]

Alright then, that about does it.

Accepted, Locked, Whatever