Kharag

[kharag]

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~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure. [/center][/i]

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Username ~ Kharag

Other characters ~ n/a

Is this character canon? ~ No

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

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Name ~ Kharag

Age ~ 14

Birthplace ~ Japan

Birthday ~ 7/17/1993

Gender ~ Male

Race ~ Nobody

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.

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Physical appearance ~ Kharag is about 5’ 7” and weighs 130 lbs. he has eyes that change from blue to red depending on his mood. He has long, red hair that goes down slightly past his neck. He is asian and has a small beard.

Clothing/Accessories ~ Kharag wears a gray and black hakama. When he fights, he takes one arm out of his sleeve. In the cold, he wears a thick, dark blue robe.

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.

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Alignment ~ Neutral

Behavior ~ Kharag is somewhat anti-social. He doesn’t talk much and he always seems lazy and asleep but is serious when he has to be.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.

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Kharag has Two ghost katanas, Each one is half of a sword. When Khar is not using the ghost Katana ability, they merge to make one, two-handed katana.

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.

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[Abillity 1] Ghost Swords
[Description of ability]
His Katana breaks into two separate blades and float in mid-air. The blades react to the movements of Kharag’s hands.

Strength: Weak. It lasts for 5 posts and time extends as it gets stronger.
Uses: It can be used twice in every battle.

[Ability 2]: Spinning darkness
[Description of ability]
Can only be used after Ghost Swords. The katanas turn black and start spinning at high speeds. Kharag throws each blade three times at the enemy.

Strength: Weak
Uses: can be used once atleast every 10 posts

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~History~

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.

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Kharag was born in the Japan. His father was fighting in Tokugawa's army. He was taught the art of bushido at a young age. His father died when he was young. He died in battle against the Nobunaga army. His mother and him imediatley fled to Twilight Town once word had reached them. When Khar turned 12, he was attacked by heartless and because of his strong heart, he was turned into a nobody. A few days later he notices this change and decides to seek out the heartless that did this too him. Instead, he found his own heartless and it attacked. After 10 minutes, he defeated the heartless using his bushido. Believing that he could never return home, he ran away from home using the gummi ship his mother had. He has been wandering for the past two years searching for his heart and destroying everyone in his path. He is now residing in Radiant Gardens.

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~Extra~

Before you embark on your journey, you see three weapons in front of you.
~ A sword
~ A shield
~ A staff
Choose wisely.

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The choices you see before you reflect the very essence of what your character stands for. Please be sure to choose the one that applies to your character, and not you.[/font]

A sword[/size][/color]

[High's .Valentine.]

...Ahem.

First thing first, there are some problems with your original home world and history. Let's try and keep things relatively real here, even though this is a fantasy RP site.

1. Your character cannot be caucasian. Why? Because he's from the Land of Dragons with Asian parents. And white people cannot have Chinese parents. Unless they were adopted. In that case, I would like to see some adoption papers. .__.

2. Bushido is Japanese. There is no Bushido in Ancient China [though it did originated from China, so I'll give you credit for that? XD]. There is kung fu, tai chi, wushu, and a bunch more Chinese martial arts for you to choose from. There's Chinese sword arts if you're looking for something similar to Bushido.

3. And Katanas...well, Chinese dun have katanas. Their swords are called 'dao'. Dao [Click for information] or jian [click for info]. Jian is similar to a katana. [FYI, jian is the katana's ancestor. Me thinks. XD]

4. I don't quite understand the half sword and one sword thingy in your weapon section. Explain please?

5. For your appearance section...the Chinese dun have kimonos either...DX If you really wanna wear something similar to a kimono, I would suggest a hakama [which is Japanese]. Kimono are usually large, heavy, a burden, and for women. A hakama is light and easier to move in.

Anyway, this is all just a matter of cultural issues and clashing. ^^;; I haven't quite looked at your abilities yet, which I will do after you edit the history and such. You can either edit in all of the above, or you can change your character's origin of birth to Japan to make everything easier. However, there's still the problem with your character being Caucasian, which really is an issue that isn't hard to solve. It's just unusual for races to mix in Ancient Asia. But this is a KH forum. The impossible can become the possible. I don't really mind anything you toss at me except for the white kid born from Asian parents thing. Good luck, and PM me if you have any questions.

[kharag]

oh, I wanted him to be japenese, but I figured there was no world that is set in japan so I tried to make him be a japanese culture living in china....... and I was thinking of a hakama but I didn't know the name xD.

okay, done editting, that better? I changed the army and the huns to the shogunate

[High's .Valentine.]

Alright, looks good now. Heh, and I busted out my culture nerdism for nothing. XD

Onto your ability.

1. Ghost Swords lasting for 20 posts...that's a bit too long. To be honest, most threads don't last more than 20 posts. [Not mine at least. DX]

Lasting 20 posts is a bit too long. I think somewhere along 2 or 3 post would work for the weak version of the ability. And to be fair, you certainly can increase the use to two times per thread.

2. Spinning Darkness: You can decrease the use on this one too. You're going to regret the 30 post cool down on this. ^^;; That's practically saying your character can use this once every thread.

Of course, these are all just suggestions. If you want to keep it that way, it's fine by me. I don't see any problems with the abilities themselves.

By the way, if you want to RP, you can go ahead and do that now. You're allowed to RP with pending characters, just don't get into any serious battles, that's all.

[kharag]

done modifying

[High's .Valentine.]

:3 Welcome to FM kiddo.

Accepted and all that Jazz~