FM, the Divine Comedy

Akito
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FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 11, 2009 7:52:29 GMT -5

Post by Akito on Sept 11, 2009 7:52:29 GMT -5

I really am too busy to be doing things like this. But I'm irresponsible like that.

Her eyes met his in a moment of wild passion, driven forth by instinct unknown to them. It was a recognition beyond physical description, beyond preconceptions of love or lust.

Yet all it was simple was simple mutual acknowledgment. So I'm not alone in this world. A secular thought.

"Iris...I..." He began, his words a stammer.

"Shush, Bilby...I...We...This is right..." She answered his hesitations with a forced confidence, belaying her own fears to ease his.

"What if he finds out? What if we are discovered? Wha-" Her hand caresses his cheek and in an instant, the soothing sensation placates his nerves and makes weak his shaking legs. Nevertheless, the fear persists, "What would he do to us?"

The question they both knew in their minds and feared. But even for a moment, they wanted this time to be theirs alon-

The front door clicked open. Akito was home early that evening.

To be continued...

I don't know. In any case, I debated whether this should be here but since I want to see everyone else take a shot at this...whatever it is...I posted it here.

Last Edit: Sept 12, 2009 6:45:34 GMT -5 by Akito

nascent Guest	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 11, 2009 10:51:42 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by nascent on Sept 11, 2009 10:51:42 GMT -5 We have... forum fanfics now. . . . . . . . . . I don't know whether to think that's awesome or disturbing. Also,

kempff Guest	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 11, 2009 13:57:44 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by kempff on Sept 11, 2009 13:57:44 GMT -5 Uh...how about just call it a comedy/drama/tragedy play on the forum? Fanfic is such a DIRTY, DIRTY, DIRTY word.

Akito God FM's Rising PIMP LORD[/color][M:-2185] Posts: 969	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 12, 2009 6:46:07 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Akito on Sept 12, 2009 6:46:07 GMT -5 Hah, if only to please you. Sometimes I feel like you're trying to pick a 4-chan fight, Nascent.
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FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 12, 2009 7:57:44 GMT -5

Post by nascent on Sept 12, 2009 7:57:44 GMT -5

4chan? Oh sweet merciful sanity no! I've heard about the place, of course, but I'd never set foot there. 99% of the Internet's most messed up stuff lives in that place... I might all well just throw myself into the loony bin and get it over with!

Also, if this is going to be a divine comedy then the staff, QMs, and veteran members oughta be depicted like Olympian deities or somesuch. Just sayin'.

III God Org XIII's Mutton Chops[M:515] ::The Whirlwind Lancer:: Posts: 454	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 12, 2009 8:49:55 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by III on Sept 12, 2009 8:49:55 GMT -5 xD XDDD I could see that. In fact, I'd be willing to write that. Akito may have issues with being Ganymede, however. And I'm not sure who should be Hades. Nas and Grav are both obvious contenders...?
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stray Guest	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 13, 2009 0:42:40 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by stray on Sept 13, 2009 0:42:40 GMT -5 When's the next one coming out? :3 ~Your biggest fan

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FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 13, 2009 2:42:44 GMT -5

Post by High's .Valentine. on Sept 13, 2009 2:42:44 GMT -5

*subscribe to story*

Ah, so this is what you were talking about. XD

FM's drama has been made into a soap show.

...AWESOME. Now the absurdity of the relationships on this forum can finally put into beautiful prose. So when's the next one going to come out? :3

he reeks of DEATH

Ryu-star! God Homac's Superior >.>[M:-285] Posts: 315	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 13, 2009 11:26:20 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ryu-star! on Sept 13, 2009 11:26:20 GMT -5 xD. Oh, Akito. You crack me up sometimes.
	mah hill. graphics credited to californiababewv of deviantart.

kempff Guest	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 13, 2009 14:16:18 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by kempff on Sept 13, 2009 14:16:18 GMT -5 You all should not encourage this kind of behaviour.

prythian Guest	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 13, 2009 14:53:37 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by prythian on Sept 13, 2009 14:53:37 GMT -5 Sept 13, 2009 14:16:18 GMT -5 @kempff said: You all should not encourage this kind of behaviour. encourage XD

Kashew God [M:543] What...You've never seen a guy cook before? Posts: 398	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 13, 2009 14:58:38 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kashew on Sept 13, 2009 14:58:38 GMT -5 This is too good... Who's the evil twin, in every soap show you have to have an evil twin.
	Kashew Kast is here to say

III God Org XIII's Mutton Chops[M:515] ::The Whirlwind Lancer:: Posts: 454	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 13, 2009 15:03:59 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by III on Sept 13, 2009 15:03:59 GMT -5 Of Bilby...? I guess that'd be... Ange. xD
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kempff Guest	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 13, 2009 15:12:50 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by kempff on Sept 13, 2009 15:12:50 GMT -5 Because you all encouraged it, I hope Akito emasculates you all. Giv' em hell daddy. : D

III God Org XIII's Mutton Chops[M:515] ::The Whirlwind Lancer:: Posts: 454	FM, the Divine Comedy Sept 13, 2009 15:15:00 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by III on Sept 13, 2009 15:15:00 GMT -5 You're the one calling him 'daddy,' Timmy. I'll have you know he's a terrific Uke. Right, Akito? =D Edit: I misspoke. I meant Aki-hime.
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