Amiel

[Amiel]

~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure.



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Username ~ : Namine

Other characters ~ : n/a

Is this character canon? ~ : n/a

Link to audition thread ~ :



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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.



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Name ~ : Amiel

Age ~ : 19

Birthplace ~ : The World That Never Was

Gender ~ : female

Race ~ : Nobody

Special Class ~ : N/A




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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.



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Physical appearance ~ : Amiel has long pink hair, blue lipstick stands at five feet and eleven inches. and weighs just at one hundred and nineteen lbs. Amiel has her down, to show off the length of her hair, and she has no bangs at all.

Clothing/Accessories ~ : Amiel has always always wears a black shirt, and black skirt as well as well as one regular boot, and one go-go boot of the same color both in black, and she does also wears a bright yellow kimono when she is working so her clothes goes by the working schedule.



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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.



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Alignment ~ : Neutral

Behavior ~ : Amiel is secretive about her goals she only wants people like Roxas to accept her so she is very trustworthy she is also kind and sweet. She is very softspoken and very calculating.

She is awfully cute-like when she ignores orders from those who give them to her. She is awfully shy around the other people, and she just adores Roxas from the bottom of her "heart". She is awfully shy around Roxas because she doesn't know how to deal with them. She doesn't talk much because she doesn't get along with people easily.

Amiel is cheerful, active, strongly competitive, resourceful, and empathetic. She reads several moves ahead. She can change from being sweet to coldhearted if it completes the mission.



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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.



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Primary Weapon(s)


ID: Azxerityaisa
Quality: average

Two silver metal fans that have a black dragon engraved onto the sides of each one. The tips have small blades attached to them. Each fan has a small chain attached to them so that Amiel can use them as ranged weapons too.



Secondary Weapon(s)


ID:

[In this space please give a brief, physical description of the secondary weapon(s) your character wields]




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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.



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AP left: none

Inner Darkness:
Amiel creates a spear made out of darkness. This spear is seven feet long, and looks like a black spear. Any damage it does is dark damage. This spear lasts for four posts.

Strength: Weak
Uses 3 times per thread, two post cool-down

Inner Flame:
Amiel has the ability to create a fire version of herself. In looks it is shaped roughly like her, but it is made purely of flames, and looks like it. This version lasts for three posts, and during that time fights for her. Anytime it hits someone it does fire damage. This fire duplicate can't be stopped by any means other than water (or blizzard, since in the KH universe water is blizzard magic).

Strength: Moderate
Uses: 3, three post cool-down

Serenity Wings
Amiel has ability to create clear, light blue wings that allow her to fly for short periods of time (up to two posts). She can fly up to fifteen miles per hour, and can go up to fifteen feet in the air. These wings are "made" of the memories she has from her days as a whole being.

Strength: Moderate
Uses: 3, five post cool-down


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Special Abilities

N/A


Minions

N/A


Summons

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~History~ Amiel is the nobody of Ariemaia, and since she is the nobody of her she fades away when her true self is around. Amiel knows how to take care of herself no matter what she does. She just didn't know how much of a thing she could do. Amiel woken up after years of slumber. She just came awake when Ariemaia was finally away from her. Amiel is a girl with who has some memories of being Mariemaia, but that is a rarity for her. She just wants to be her own person without any worry for her being Mariemaia's nobody. Amiel just looked around, and she tried to decipher where she is at. Only the moon seems to be her only friend she gotten in this world.

After a quick talk with Ariemaia, and Ariemaia asked her who she is, and how she looks like her. Amiel replies I do not know I just look like you but that's a complete mystery to me. Amiel does what she usually wants because she is a girl who was created to do as she wants while Ariemaia is left by herself on the homeworld she is from. Amiel doesn't know too much of herself so she is afraid of the answers that might be given to her.

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.



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~Class~

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.

~ A sword of terrible destruction - The power of the warrior: Invincible courage.

~ A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.

You know that one of them must be chosen. What power will you seek?




[Sword]



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~Other~



[Amiel is all arond person that likes to be with people]

[angelous]

As High already knows, I modified this profile to help Amiel out who was having connection issues. And as such I know about the Roxas references in her personality. I don't care if they are there, so don't tell her to take them out.

Alrighty?

KThxBai!

[stray]

Alright, a few things to note:

Personality: So, is she a Nobody that can feel? Or are the examples you gave how she pretends to act? Please specify and edit. If she is a Nobody that can feel, please explain how this is so in either this section or the History section.

History: How does your character know Roxas? He is mentioned under the personality section, but then no where else. Also, think about redoing the first paragraph, as you put in a lot of characteristic traits that should be mentioned in her personality. History needs to be more about, especially for a Nobody, how they came to be, where they've been, and what they've done to this moment.

Abilities:
-Inner Darkness: What is a normal spear? Is it solid in appearance, or made of darkness? As a weak ability, it is only allowed one form of attack. Since you already have weapons that deal physical damage, I would suggest having this spear only deal darkness damage.

-Inner Flame: What does this duplicate look like? Exactly like your character? It fights for you, so what does it do? You mentioned that it burns people, but status effects cannot be used with physical or magical attacks. Either make this ability dedicated to fire damage or the burn status effect.

-Serenity Wings: The ability gives her a speed boost, which is fine. However, making her look like she's almost flying seems sort of useless. Still, if that's what you want, I guess that's ok. I have to ask though, how does one look like this, and what could it do to help you in a situation? The 'inner peace' wings cannot be allowed, as this should be its own ability. (It has nothing to do with speed boosts.) You can make it a separate ability, but I must ask, would a Nobody have any use for this ability in the first place, seeing as they don't feel?

[angelous]

I'm just pointing out that this is being edited, it's just going slowly do to the fact that I haven't been on much if at all the last few days.

Yeah I'm the one putting in the edits, but only because her internet connection is crappy and shuts down when she tries to.

[stray]

The abilities look much better. The history could use work, but you can always work on that and update it at the Save Point. Your character does strike me as a bit of a Sue fangirl, specifically for Roxas. However, I'm going to go ahead and pass your character. There is a lot you can learn from this board, and I suggest you take advantage of all the great rpers here.