Marie Rubis, the Crimson Rose

[Homac]

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~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure. [/center][/i]

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Username ~ :Homac

Other characters ~ : Click on the link at the bottom.

Is this character canon? ~ : No.

Link to audition thread ~ :

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

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Name ~ : Marie Rubis, aka the Crimson Rose

Age ~ : 20

Birthplace ~ : Port Royal.

Gender ~ : Female

Race ~ : Human.

Special Class ~ : Tamer

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.

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Physical appearance ~ : Marie has brown hair, held back in a messy ponytail so it doesn't get in her way during a fight. Her eyes are blue, and she considers them to look too innocent for a pirate's eyes. She is somewhat muscular, a result of her training, but could pass for a refined lady if she tried. She's average height, and average weight, though she won't tell her exact weight. She also has a tattoo of a rose on her right forearm, so it's usually only seen when she fights, and the source of her nickname.

Clothing/Accessories ~ : Marie wears what would seem to be abnormal gear for pirates. She has a bandana that is almost always on her head. She always wears short sleeved shirts, so that if she gets into a fight, people can see her tattoo. Along with these, she wears long pants, and combat boots.

The Ship ~ : The Argama is the ship Marie took command of after her captain died. The Argama is a special ship, as it can be run by one person if needed due to the fact that is has gummi parts as well as ship parts. These same parts allow it to move through space. The Argama has two main cannons, one on each side of the front, as well as smaller cannons on the side. It's flag is mainly white, with a red rose in the middle.

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.

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Alignment ~ : Neutral

Behavior ~ : Marie is a complicated individual, at some times seeming to have two personalities. She's normally friendly, smiling constantly and happy to help people. This is the personality that helps her get into towns and learn things about it, along with helping her make friends easier than enemies. Her other personality seems to appear once she's set her mind on doing something. She becomes extremely focused, and deadly to anyone who tries to stop her or get in her way.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.

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Primary Weapon(s)

ID: Wrath and Pride
Quality: Average
Marie took had Wrath and Pride made after she saw the fighting style of the famous pirate, Cervantes. Pride is a straight sword, made of steel. It's three feet long, and light enough that it can easily be held in one hand. Wrath, on the other hand, is a different kind of sword. Only a foot and a half long, there's a revolver built into the handle for a suprise attack. As such, the hilt has the barrel of the gun below the blade, with the trigger put where Marie can pull it easily.

Secondary Weapon(s)

ID:None.

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.

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AP left:0

You're in the way!
Marie does a short combo on her enemy, a left slash with Pride, a downward slash with Wrath, a right slash with Pride, and a diagnol half slash with Wrath, and when Wrath is pointed at the enemy, she shoots. The attack has the chance to disarm an opponent who tries to block the combo. It's recharge is 2 turns.
Strength: Moderate
Uses: 4

Here's a gift!
Marie throws a bag of gunpowder at her enemy, and then shoots it when it's in their face, causing it to explode. Recharge is 1 turn.
Strength: Weak
Uses: 4


Items

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Equips

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Special Abilities

N/A


Minions

Grade: A

Name(s): Bright and Guy

Appearance(s): Bright has well kept black hair and an average build. He usually wears long sleeved white shirts and long pants, which gives him the appearance of a gentleman. He has a rifle that he normally wears strapped to his back.

Guy is Bright's opposite. He has messy dirty blonde hair, is extremely muscular, and looks like nothing more than a street brawler with a sleeveless shirt, long pants, and a slightly torn jacket. His weapon of choice are a pair of metal gauntlets.

Abilities:

We've got your back!:
As long as Bright and Guy are both fighting alongside Marie, she does extra damage, due to her being able to fight all out.
Strength: Moderate
Uses:Passive

One-two Punch:
Bright and Guy move in unison, with Bright pinning down the enemy until Leo gets close, where he hits them with a powerful uppercut. Cooldown is three turns
Strenght:Weak
Uses:Inf.

Elemental Weakness: Ice

History: Noah Bright is the second-in-command of the ship, directly below Marie, making him the Second Mate. He's the one who decided to take the now leader of the ship in when they found her as well. Oddly, everyone on the crew refers to him by his last name. Guy is the combat specialist of the ship. He has no last name that he's told the crew. He joined up a year after Marie took over the ship, joining after she helped him in a bar brawl against some people whom he owed money.

Grade: A

Name(s): Rio and Jack

Appearance(s): Rio is a small guy. He's wirey, but does look like a navigator, which is his job. He wears a pair of goggles, along with a white shirt, a jacket, and long pants.

Jack, well... Jack's a monkey. A monkey with a shirt and vest. Not much else to it.

Abilities:

Distraction!:
Jack scurries towards the enemy and jumps on their face, scratching at their eyes. Although it's easy to knock him off, it ususally gives Marie time to attack. Cooldown is two turns.
Strength: Weak
Uses: Inf.

Explosive field:
Rio throws two handfuls of bombs that he made around the enemy. The bombs explode whenever something touches them, or after two turns. The explosion is big enough to knock a normal sized person off their feet. Recharge is two turns.
Strength: Moderate
Uses: 5

Elemental Weakness: Fire

History: Rio was a member of the ship's crew before Marie joined. He had always done the job he did now, keeping the ship moving in the right direction. Jack was one of the more interesting additions to the ship. Marie found him while she was getting info on a town that she was planning on raiding. Finding him to be immortal, she decided to take him with her, as she figured every good pirate needs some kind of animal with them.

Summons

N/A

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~History~

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.

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Marie doesn't remember much other than being a part of the crew of the Argama. She was found by Bright when she was six, and the previous captain of the ship allowed her to stay on with them after she took down the first mate with a kick to the groin. So, she grew up a pirate. Twelve years later though, disaster struck. The first mate betrayed the rest of the ship, turning them over to the Navy. The Argama would have been done there, if the Captain hadn't given himself up to give the rest of the crew time to escape. Afterwards, the crew spent a year on one mission: revenge. They finally tracked down the once first mate, and took their revenge for the captain. After that, most of the crew drifted apart, broken up by the loss of their leader and the betrayal of his friend. So in the end, the Argama's crew was Marie, Bright, and Rio. In honor of her captain, Marie decided to be first mate of the ship, though she was the leader now.

They managed to do well though, after Marie recruited Guy. They were dangerous, despite the small size of the crew, and every member had high bounties on there head, including Jack. Marie's idea for the crew was quality over quantity, and it worked out rather well. Along with this, Bright and Marie would usually sneak into the city they planned to attack to learn a bit about it before attacking, a plan that worked more often than it failed. Now, they're still on the move to avoid being captured.

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~Class~

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.

~ A sword of terrible destruction - The power of the warrior: Invincible courage.

~ A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.

You know that one of them must be chosen. What power will you seek?

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Marie picks up the sword.

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~Other~

Yes, I took Jack. Is that a problem?
And Marie's fighting style looks like this

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Marie does a short combo on her enemy, a left slash with Pride, a downward slash with Wrath, a right slash with Pride, and a diagnol half slash with Wrath, and when Wrath is pointed at the enemy, she shoots.

Are you sure you want to use 4 AP for something like that? It sounds like the kind of move she could execute even if it wasn't an Ability. Maybe you should add something special to it, like unnatural attack speed or the capacity to disarm an opponent? Just a thought.

Also, halfway through your minion writeup you switch from Bright and Guy to Bright and Leo.

... Should I assume that 'Jack' is the same monkey from PotC? Also, your description of Explosive Field is unfinished.

Take care of those details and you can set sail for the seven seas!

[Homac]

Edited. And yes, Jack is the immortal monkey. That's why he can just throw himself on an opponent with no regard for his health.

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