The Attack

[darkriku]

Well, I know that most of the people in our thread don't really come around till the evening anyway, so I think we'll be alright. Probably because of school having started in many places this week. But yeah, I have a post that I'm working on right now so it should be up as soon as I come back. ^^

[darkriku]

Erm, hope you guys don't mind that I just decided to post without first showing my post. >.>;

[Wilder~Light]

I'm sure the post is fine lol, I'll check it out in a minute.

[darkriku]

Question.... how should we go about dealing with errors such as these? Are we going to be nice and tell people to change? Or are we just going to absolutely take advantage of them? For example:

My earlier posted stated,

The long, slimy body of a tremendous worm laid spread out against the courtyard’s now quivering stone walls. Without eyes or ears to guide it, a prehensile forked tongue lolled out to one side of its massive jaws, equipped with three rows of teeth.

Now read this most recent post which says,

He barked loudly and ran at the worm. He dropped on all fours and then jumped onto the top of the worm's head. He began attempting to claw the thing's eyes out.

So yeah... There aren't any eyes to claw out... >.>; Not only that, but the worm is slimey and would probably be hard to grasp onto.

So anyways, if we are to take advantage of this situation, do we write so that it is a normal attack and the person is able to choose whether they take the hit or not, or will we be the ones to decide their character's fate, and so write what happens be it damage or death?

I kinda wanna kill him for such a dumb mistake. xD That, and it seems no one is really paying attention to our fight anyway, chat board wise at least. It would be a nice little shock to people.

Ahh... I can already picture the death scene... ^^

[Wilder~Light]

I am leaving out the "Reactions" when I'm fighting.

Think of it like this, I grab you by the neck, pick you up, and throw you. Now I have just controlled the attack, the hit, and what happens, BUT I left out the reaction, AKA, what happens after the impact (I threw you, do you land on your legs? All fours? On your back? etc).


Honestly, I say take full advantage of that immediately. #1, we TOLD them to pay attention and be a good write. A good writer pays attention >.< #2, you're right, a nice little shock might get them to pay attention, but don't outright kill him, just give him something to complain about lol

[darkriku]

Aww... I wanted to keel him dead! XD

Alright, I got what your saying. My only problem is if my pet worm bit the doggy, I'm not sure the puppy would survive.... >.>; So I guess I'll need to think of something else. =p

[Wilder~Light]

I have to get this out of my system, and yes, I'm going to be picked on for this >.> lol


That worm reminds me of a Taxxon >.> lol

[darkriku]

A... Taxxon? What's that?

*goes to look it up*

Ohh... interesting! Though, I never read the series.

[darkriku]

Question! How long are we going to wait for people to post?

Also, I thought I read somewhere that the person that plays Replica Riku might be away... =/

But yeah, I'm getting kinda tired or waiting to post as Dawn. =p

[Wilder~Light]

How long for people to post, simple.

2 days with 2 remaining people.

If everyone except for TWO people have posted, then they have 2 days to post or they will be skipped, thus they will be maimed/hurt.

Now, if someone has been skipped TWICE *Looks at Jack* They can then be killed, or seriously maimed if you're feeling nice lol


That's something I'm really iffy on, Replica Riku, Roxas, and Namine, what to do with them when we come across them...*Rubs head*

[darkriku]

Umm... are people allowed to withdrawal without penalty?

Because Seraph in our Disney Castle attack just up and left... o.o;

Should I add him with Jack and have my worm eat him next post? x3

[Wilder~Light]

*Sighs* Let Seraph go, just mention seeing his character leave.

[darkriku]

So, I already know Xero is going to portal away in his next post. Should no one interfere, would that be possible in his current state of being trapped against a hedge and held by his arm between a giant worm's teeth?

I'd be ok with it if he didn't boast about how it didn't matter cause he character could just heal his entire arm, if if the flesh and muscle were ripped from it. You'd think that much pain would cause someone to pass out!

[darkriku]

Lol, I know I keep saying this, but this time I really am going to attack Gemini with the intent to kill, just so you guys know. We already have Repliku headed for Dusk, so that's all we really needed anyway. Plus, Gemini's exit was really godmodding if you ask me. He pretty much said that a current carried him to the castle. For one, he can't control the water, that's Ophelia's say. And two, there's been no current mentioned. Also, he completely ignored/forgot that he's in the water with two worms and a hungry merling.

So yeah... I'm kinda getting tired of him messing up the thread.

I'm also tired of Roxas posting out of order! ><;