Donald audition

[angelous]

Username: angelous
Current canons: none
Canon you're auditioning for: Donald Duck
Media canon is from: Kh 1, CoM, 2
Is the current canon taken?: no
Audition post (400 words):

Woosh! Screech! Crash! "Yeeeeeeaaaaaah!"

Donald came running out of the gummi hanger, tail caught on fire. He was screaming loudly and within seconds, he began to run in circles.

Moments later Goofy came out of the hanger perfectly unharmed. He laughed. "Hyuck. Gawrsh Donald. Maybe you should put that fire out."

Donald glared at him, and snapped, "Well just how am I supposed to do that Goofy?!"

Goofy replied, "Well lets see, there's stop, drop, and roll. There's smothering it with some sort of blanket. You can put it out with water. Or, since you can use magic, why don't you put it out with your spells?"

Donald stopped running. "You know, thats not such a bad idea. Why didn't I think of that?" Donald pulled out his staff, and pointed it at his tail. "Blizzard!" Snow shot out of his staff, quickly putting out the fire. Then he started yelling again.

"That was a dumb idea Goofy! Now I can't feel my tail! Its freezing!"
He started running around in circles again, wondering what to do.

Goofy cocked his head and said, "Why don't you just warm it up with your spells?"

Donald looked at him, a look that said remember what happened last time. He sighed. "Guess I have no other choice, unless I want it to thaw out." He pointed his staff at his tail once more. "Fire!"

Then he had a look of pain on his face. "Yeeeeaaaah!" Donald screamed. His tail caught fire once again. He began running once more. About two minutes later, he ran into the castle wall.

When he came to, the fire was out, and the feathers on his tail were missing.

"Goofy! I knew that was a bad idea!" Donald cried. "Huh??" Donald looked around, and saw Goofy was napping, and that there was a note on his chest. Donald pushed himself up, and stood. Then he walked over to Goofy. He picked up the note, which had the king's crest on it. He then turned his attention to Goofy.

He stepped on Goofy's stomach and screamed, "Wake up Goofy! The King left us a note!"

Goofy's eyes opened and he stood up when Donald moved his foot.
"Well, what does it say Donald?" Goofy asked.

Donald read the note. As his eyes went from side to side reading the King's words, his mouth dropped open.

"Goofy. We need to go find Sora! And this time, I am flying the gummi ship!"

[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

In all honesty, this didn't seem like an audition to me. It focused more on the joke of Goofy telling Donald dumb advice, and Donald following it in a semi-comedic manner. Still, Donald wasn't that dumb in the game, and this showed too much of Goofy and Donald than it did just Donald. Also, the ending was...somewhat randomly thrown in there. I'm going to have to 1/2 deny this. Unless Zero and Tempest over-rule my vote, feel free to try for another in a week.

[Zero [Axel]]

2/2 Denied.

Try again in a week if you want.