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Post by danieldanciu on Aug 12, 2007 3:38:38 GMT -5
Halock's profile need a little tweaking for the sake of making it look neater and be more functional. 1. It would be nice if the link to his picture in the Appearance section was editted to be like this: [*url=http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/3290/piclm4.jpg/url]Halock[/url] (remove the asterisk in the final product). 2. Same goes for the link to the Theme Song section: [*url=http://youtube.com/watch?v=CJX0pbr9N2E/url]Just One[/url]. 3. Underline the name of Halock's weapon: Xartus. Underline the three major abilities: Hallway of Light, Shadow Summoning, and Dusk Summoning. 4. In the sixth paragraph of the Bio, I mention "the key-hole shaped room" in the tower. Replace it with "a key-hole shaped dent in the wall somewhere". Also, run it through Microsoft Word to correct any common capitalization mistakes
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Post by Medy on Aug 20, 2007 16:46:16 GMT -5
All edited in as requested.
Edited and locked.
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