Larenzo Dem, Necromancer.

[Renewed Gemini]

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Username: gemini

Gender: Male

Other Character(s): Here
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Name: Larenzo Dem

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Alignment: Villian

Origin: The Underworld (explained in history)
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Appearance: Larenzo

Physical Features: Larenzo is quite tall. His exact height is 6'8". This makes him quite intimidating. He is of average weight. In fact, he has no visible body fat. Most of his weight is muscle. If he were to have his shirt off, you can trace every bulge of his muscles. He has black, stringy hair that goes down past his shoulders. He always stands very straight and never slouches. He is very proud which can sometimes be his downfall.

Facial Features: Larenzo is very apathetic and his face shows it, but he is extremely handsome. He really doesn't care much about a fight and only ever shows emotion when he's enjoying someone's pain, or when he, himself, is losing the battle. His apathy is something that he believes gives him an advantage because he doesn't get distracted with emotions. His eyes are hazel and small. He has long, bushy, black eyebrows that have an arch to them. His nose...is a nose as is his mouth. Neither of them have anything very distingquishing because they are both very normal. His teeth are very white which give him a slight charm when he does smile.

Clothing: Larenzo wears a brown cloak that is covered by a black cape. In his shoulders are iron plates to protect him. They are very flexible and therefore they aren't really distracting to him. He also wears tan gauntless that have openings around his fingers. Underneath that are two white gloves that are also open around his fingers.

Miscellaneous Items/Articles: Larenzo has a gold medallion with a red ruby in the middle hung around his neck. It is what he calls a "good luck charm."

Personality:

Resolve: Larenzo's main goal in life is to just terrorize. He gets a kick out of others' fears. He kills, he destroys, he simply walks. Just his images is enough to send people into a state of terror.

Pursuit: Why does Larenzo like terrorizing people? It's mostly explained in his history, but he truly doesn't believe that people deserve to live. He was locked away in the Underworld long ago. Now he's out for revenge by taking his anger out on everyone.

Fears: This is quite simple. He fears anyone more powerful than him. But instead of running, he will still fight because the fact that there is someone more powerful is a threatening thought to him.

Hopes: Larenzo simply wishes to kill. With all that die, he hopes to one day make an army of undead. Yes, he's a Necromancer.

Hobbies: He kills people and perfects his summoning techniques.

Public Personality/Private Personality:
In public Larenzo is quiet. He doesn't speak in battles very much. If he does speak, it's mostly a snide or intimidating remark. He almost always has a blank face especially when commanding his summon. He usually has his black cape wrapped around him so that people only see his head and the black cape around his body.

In private, Larenzo is much more developed. He is shown to be somewhat of a poet and a lover. He is very charming...to those that he sees deserve it. He is always plotting and strategizing new ways to attack with his summon, and always trying to perfect his own fighting skills.

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Class: Mage

Weapons:

Weapon Name: Death's eye.

Weapon Description: Larenzo's good luck medallion that hangs around his neck is his weapon. When broken off of it's chain, it morphs. The medallion grows from about 3 inches to 3 feet and the red ruby in the middle morphs into a pole that makes a diameter across the center of the golden medallion. Spikes fling out of the the perimeter of the circle.

Unique Notes: The weapon was stolen from an ancient battlemaster in the Underworld.

Abilities:

Base Ability:

Sub Abilities:

SUMMON

Name: Dracolich (pronounced "Dra-co-litch")
Appearance: Dracolich
The Dracolich is about 30 feet tall (50 feet with the wings) and 40 feet long. Because of the size of the creature and depending on the battlefield, the Dracolich is usually stationary. It still scratches and bites, but only if the enemy comes within range. It mostly relies on its abilites and summoner for protection.

Base Ability: Wormhole Generation

Sub Abilities:

• Shadow Ball: Three foot black balls are fired from the Dracolich's mouth. Upon impact of anything, these balls explode. This is because the balls are actually portals to a negative world that cannot hold anything within our universe.
  
• Portal Hops: Small portals that can grow as large as 6 feet are opened all throughout the battlefield and can be controlled by the Dracolich. With this, the Dracolich can fire enemy's attacks back at the enemy.
  
• The Black Hole: One of the most powerful wormholes ever created. The Dracolich flaps its wings hard enough to open a black hole 45 feet tall and 45 feet wide. This hole begins sucking in everything around it. It is like being pushed by a 40 mph wind into a black hole, except it's sucking people in. The Dracolich stabs its claws into the ground to not move and Larenzo uses the creature for cover. Use: Once per thread.

Base Ability: Gravity

Sub Abilities:

• Flight: The Dracolich is able to manipulate its gravitational field and fly. This ability only affects the Dracolich, but it can carry anything or anyone on its back, as long as it is not bigger of heavier than the Dracolich itself.
  
• Grav Shield: A purple dome flickers and surrounds the Dracolich. It can protect the Dracolich from any projectiles, but a person can enter and exit from the dome. While this dome is up, the Dracolich cannot move or fly or else the dome will drop and the Dracolich will be vulnerable to projectiles once again.
  
• Graviga: Pretty self-explanatory. The Dracolich can cast a simple graviga spell, but because of the Dracolich's size, the average graviga spell size goes from 6 feet to 12 feet. If you don't know what this spell does, it's a large black dome that surrounds the target and then the dome collapses, creating a large amount of pressure on the opponent and giving them damage (like have a small car dropped on you). The spell lasts 5 seconds before disappearing.

Physical Attack: 4
Physical Defense: 4
Magical Attack: 3
Magical Defense: 2
Reflexes:1
Speed:1
Awareness: 1

Summon Description: When Larenzo summons the Dracolich, he pulls a giant chain from out of the earth. He then swings it around his head and throws it into the sky. A black portal opens up in the sky and the chain goes in. Once it snags the creature, the chain pulls out the Dracolich. The Dracolich falls to the ground, landing on its feet and the chain sinks back into the earth.

Items: None

Equips: None

Distribution Points:

Physical Attack: 4
Physical Defense: 3
Magical Attack: 2
Magical Defense: 2
Reflexes: 2
Speed: 2
Awareness: 1

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History: Larenzo Dem. It's like a whisper on the wind. Larenzo.... That's exactly what Larenzo started as, a whisper and nothing more. He was a born within the Underworld as the experiment of a Necromancer named Dali. He was supposed to be an undead summoner, but instead, he got a Necromancer Summoner. Dali didn't see it as a total loss. He could train the boy to become a Necromancer like himself.

And train he did. He taught the young summoner the ways of a Necromancer, how killing souls was the only way to raise an army of undead. One of the biggest memories that Larenzo had with Dali was the day that he graduated from summoner to Necromancer. He asked him "So now do I summon undead?" Larenzo had asked eagerly. The thought of summoning an undead soldier was so exciting to him.

Dali chuckled as if he was Santa Claus. "No Dali, you do not summon undead soldiers ever, because you are not like that. You are special. You will be a Monster Summoner. Your job is to gather souls for our army."

And then he was taken. Dali was practicing illegal experments within the Underworld and since Larenzo was one of the illegal experiments he was taken, also. He was celled with a man named Alacor. Alacor was a battlemaster from the world above. Yet he had sold his soul to win a tournament and didn't know that part of the deal was that he had to live in the Underworld for the rest of eternity. But Alacor hung onto one thing. A medallion called "Death's Eye." Death's Eye was actually a weapon, but within the cell, for some reason, it couldn't be activated.

Larenzo lived out 10 years in that cell. In that time he learned the real story as to why he was sentenced. It turned out that Larenzo was truly from the upper world also. He had been a summoner in training in a world called "Spira." However, because of Dali's experiments, Larenzo was pulled from his world and into the Underworld. You may be sitting there thinking that it just doesn't make sense. How is he pulled from one world and thrown into another. Larenzo didn't understand it either. All he knew was that Dali was to blame. But Dali had to have someone on the outside. Larenzo had to find out.

Imagine his surprise when after 10 years, who showed up at his cell door? It was Dali. He had the key to the cell and helped Larenzo escape. Alacor was sleeping. Larenzo told Dali that he would catch up. He walked over to Alacor and strangled him. He took Death's Eye and ran. Yes 10 years in the Underworld can change you. It changed Larenzo. He didn't even remember who he was all those many years ago on the foreign world of Spira. He didn't even know where Spira was. All he had was dreams. Dreams that he no longer cared about. He was Larenzo Dem, the Necromancer. There was nothing more to know....

Larenzo met up with Dali and Dali told him that there wasn't much time. He had to leave. He gave Larenzo a scroll explaining how to summon his first monster, the Dracolich. Larenzo looked at him with his deep eyes and asked him, "Why did you take me from my home?" Dali sighed. He knew this day would come. He quickly explained himself.

Truly, Larenzo's birth in the Underworld wasn't an accident. They had noticed him at the ripe age of 10. Who they was, Dali didn't explain. When he was 15, Dali knew that they needed him. He looked so promising that he was going to be a High Summoner in the future, but Dali needed him. He tore him from his family and wiped Larenzo's memory. He changed him. Even the arrest was set up to change Larenzo into Dali's image. Well it had worked.

With that, Larenzo decided to see if Alacor's tales were true. He activated Death's Eye. It grow 3 feet long and the red ruby in the middle became a long handle. Spikes shot out along the side. Dali looked at it and closed his eyes.

"I deserve it," he said. Those were his last words as he was struck down. And Larenzo ran. He escaped the Underworld with that dreaded scroll. He didn't care who he used to be or even who he was supposed to be in the future. He was Larenzo Dem...

And he would have his revenge....
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Larenzo and the Dracolich share a special bond. What Larenzo can see, the Dracolich sees and vice versa, so if they are ever separated, the Dracolich can use his ability to give Larenzo a return portal, or Larenzo can order the Dracolich to defend himself with a Shadow Ball. You get the picture.

[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

Ok, you're going to have to change some things about your summon.

For your second ability, there's nothing wrong with the transportation of the projectiles, but you can't warp Larenzo. Warping/speed abilities aren't allowed.

For your third ability, that's way too powerful. 100x100? That's literally indestructable. It could probably take out the majority of a large metropolotan city. You'll definately have to change that.

And the size needs changing, but you're discussing that with me now, so yeah.

[Renewed Gemini]

Alright, it's all fixed. I hope.

[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

Alright, just a warning, statement, and a change. For the third ability, I'm sure I dont have to tell you to not use that move often. That was the warning.

Statement: You won't really be able to summon unless you're in a large area. I mean, even though you toned the size down, he's still somewhat big. In places like Traverse Town, that'd be a no-no.

Change: Put a cap on it. I'm sure it goes without saying, but it's best to say it for the record.

[Renewed Gemini]

Yeah, yeah, I know, I know. and he could be summoned in the 1st district of Traverse Town. and the second district...3rd may be too small.

[~/\The Dragon Writer/\~]

...touche.

Anyway, should be fine now.

~Accepted~

Locked and moved.