Redesign!

[servant]

Never gave this guy any abilities, so I figure I'll give 'em now. //Edit: Hell, let's redesign him.

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~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure. [/center][/i]

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Username ~ : servant

Other characters ~ : Yuffie Kisaragi, Luxord

Is this character canon? ~ : No

Link to canon thread ~ :

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

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Name ~ : Nicholas 'Nils' Magnus

Age ~ : 17

Birthplace ~ : Mildain

Birthday ~ : Winter

Gender ~ : Male

Race ~ : Human

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.

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Physical appearance ~ :
At just 5'5" height, you'd almost wager he's short. Which he is, too. He constantly gets teased about it, and seriously has issues with his height. With just 140 lbs, though, he might be a tad on the light side, but hey, that's alright.

He's got silverly hair, which is actually better kept than most people can claim of their hairdoes. Though bangs are slightly long, the rest isn't. Eyes are red and vibrant, grin on the face is somehow encouraging.

He has a regular sword-fighter build, meaning plenty of muscles to swing about a sword, and the stamina to maintain a fight for a while. He's still slender, though, which means his fighting style relies more on finesse than brute strength.

Clothing/Accessories ~ :
A regular outfit, really. Grey-coloured t-shirt with a red, long-sleeved hoodie worn open. Dark-grey corduroy pants, brown shoes.

But then you have Super Hero Magnus! ... or really just Nicholas when he's got to fight, at which times he summons a full-suit of armour. Including a hat. Here follows a description which I blatantly ripped from his old design:

A lightly-blue-coloured armour. It's a full suit of armour, too: fauld with tassets for torso and that region, pauldrons for the shoulders, vambraces and gauntlets for arms and hands, greaves for legs and sabbatons for the feet and, finally, a helmet for the head. In short, a full suit of armour. And it's all a shade of blue that reminds anyone of the sky. The hat he wears really doesn't offer much in the way of protection, but it is warm and comfortable.

He also wears a black mail suit underneath. This is particularly important as a part of his upper-legs, and his elbows for a start, and his abdomen would otherwise be completely exposed to enemy attacks. His neck should also have a gorget for protection, but as Nicholas finds it restrictive, he instead just has mail cover that as well.

His sword's at his side, and he has an azure-blue mantle to clasp around his shoulders. It can easily be loosened before combat.

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.

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Alignment ~ : Lawful Evil

Behavior ~ : A chivalrous and sporting young lad who, despite attempts to act in an honourable way, tends to be egotistical and self-absorbed to the point of neglecting other people's feelings.

This does not necessarily make him an evil person, but under the DnD classification Nicholas simply has no other place but to be Lawful Evil, though he is more on the Lawfully Lawful Evil side than the Neutral or Chaotically Lawful Evil side.

He often has a passive stance in conflicts, preferring to only intervene when necessary and abstain from any unnecessary mingling when he thinks it'll resolve on itself.

Cannot refuse to assist someone who asks for it, though--he'd let an old lady lay crippled on the floor at times, still, unless specifically prompted to help.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.

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Einst
A double-edged sword. Its grip is large enough for the weapon to be held with two hands, but it is also designed for single-handed wielding. Its annulet also keeps this in mind.

The pommel is a round shape with an oddly shaped crest on it. If I had to describe it, I'd say you ought to think of a tornado seen from above.

The blade itself is around 29 inches, with a narrow fuller but a relatively broad blade. The point is acute.

Blade's form, don't mind the hilt it's not the same as Nicholas' sword:

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.

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AP: [2]

[Linear Equation]:
[An attack that strengthens Nicholas' sword with energy. Although it is only slightly stronger than a regular attack, it gets stronger every time it is consecutively used. It reaches its maximum potential after five hits, at which point it rivals the strength of moderate abilities.]

Strength: Weak
Uses: One post cool down after the sixth attack--resets the build-up. Can only be used once per post, too, coincidentally.

[Summed Up]:
[Releases a burst of energy from Nicholas' sword. Although it is only weak in power at first, a little stronger than Linear Equation's first attack, it gains in strength proportionate to the amount of enemies currently facing off against Nicholas. It is a wide-area attack meant to obliterate many small enemies--even at maximum strength with a number of enemies greater than ten, it still isn't much stronger than moderate.]

Strength: Weak
Uses: No charges, no cool downs, final destination.

[Singularity Division]:
[Bolsters Nicholas' defenses so long as he is alone. If no allies join in the fight, Nicholas' defenses are quite capable of withstanding moderate-level abilities with good results. When allies join in, however, Nicholas' defenses take a great loss and he is, instead, left with mediocre defense.]

Strength: Weak
Uses: Passive

[Multiply by Two]:
[Damage dealt by the next attack is two times as great--damage received is also two times as great. One turn only.]

Strength: Weak
Uses: Once every five turns, can be used in conjunction with other moves.

Equips
N/A

Special Abilities
N/A

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~History~

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.

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In a world where people are normal and, all the same, exalted warriors fighting whatever threat threatens them (occasionally, they just fight eachother), Nicholas emerged as a person who just wanted to go his own way.

So, hey, he did go his own way. He bade adieu to his own hearth and home, waved Mildain farewell and set off into the sea of stars.

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~Class~

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.

~ A sword of terrible destruction - The power of the warrior: Invincible courage.

~ A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.

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[Sword]

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~Other~

[Put anything else you want to say about your character in here.]

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[center]~Basic info~[/b][/u]

[i][b]Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure.[/b] [/center][/i]

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[size=1][blockquote][i]Username[/i] ~ : servant

[i]Other characters[/i] ~ : Yuffie Kisaragi, Luxord

[i]Is this character canon?[/i] ~ : No

[i]Link to canon thread[/i] ~ :[/blockquote][/size]

[b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b]

[u][b][center]~Character Info~[/u]

[i]Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

[b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b]

[size=1][blockquote][i]Name[/i] ~ : Nicholas 'Nils' Magnus

[i]Age[/i] ~ : 17

[i]Birthplace[/i] ~ : Mildain

[i]Birthday[/i] ~ : Winter

[i]Gender[/i] ~ : Male

[i]Race[/i] ~ : Human[/blockquote][/size]

[b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b]

[center][b]~Appearance~[/b]

[i][b]As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.[/center][/b][/i]

[b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b]

[size=1][blockquote][i]Physical appearance[/i] ~ :
At just 5'5" height, you'd almost wager he's short. Which he is, too. He constantly gets teased about it, and seriously has issues with his height. With just 140 lbs, though, he might be a tad on the light side, but hey, that's alright.

He's got silverly hair, which is actually better kept than most people can claim of their hairdoes. Though bangs are slightly long, the rest isn't. Eyes are red and vibrant, grin on the face is somehow encouraging.

He has a regular sword-fighter build, meaning plenty of muscles to swing about a sword, and the stamina to maintain a fight for a while. He's still slender, though, which means his fighting style relies more on finesse than brute strength.

[i]Clothing/Accessories[/i] ~ :
A regular outfit, really. Grey-coloured t-shirt with a red, long-sleeved hoodie worn open. Dark-grey corduroy pants, brown shoes.

But then you have Super Hero Magnus! ... or really just Nicholas when he's got to fight, at which times he summons a full-suit of armour. Including a hat. Here follows a description which I blatantly ripped from his old design:

A lightly-blue-coloured armour. It's a full suit of armour, too: fauld with tassets for torso and that region, pauldrons for the shoulders, vambraces and gauntlets for arms and hands, greaves for legs and sabbatons for the feet and, finally, a helmet for the head. In short, a full suit of armour. And it's all a shade of blue that reminds anyone of the sky. The hat he wears really doesn't offer much in the way of protection, but it is warm and comfortable.

He also wears a black mail suit underneath. This is particularly important as a part of his upper-legs, and his elbows for a start, and his abdomen would otherwise be completely exposed to enemy attacks. His neck should also have a gorget for protection, but as Nicholas finds it restrictive, he instead just has mail cover that as well.

His sword's at his side, and he has an azure-blue mantle to clasp around his shoulders. It can easily be loosened before combat.[/blockquote][/size]

[b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b]

[b][center]~Personality~

[i]As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.[/center][/b][/i]

[b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b][blockquote]

[size=1][i]Alignment[/i] ~ : Lawful Evil

[i]Behavior[/i] ~ : A chivalrous and sporting young lad who, despite attempts to act in an honourable way, tends to be egotistical and self-absorbed to the point of neglecting other people's feelings.

This does not necessarily make him an evil person, but under the DnD classification Nicholas simply has no other place but to be Lawful Evil, though he is more on the Lawfully Lawful Evil side than the Neutral or Chaotically Lawful Evil side.

He often has a passive stance in conflicts, preferring to only intervene when necessary and abstain from any unnecessary mingling when he thinks it'll resolve on itself.

Cannot refuse to assist someone who asks for it, though--he'd let an old lady lay crippled on the floor at times, still, unless specifically prompted to help.[/size]

[/blockquote][b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b]

[center][b]~Weapons~[/b]

[b][i]Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.[/center][/i][/b]

[b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b]

[size=1][blockquote][b][u]Einst[/u][/b]
A double-edged sword. Its grip is large enough for the weapon to be held with two hands, but it is also designed for single-handed wielding. Its annulet also keeps this in mind.

The pommel is a round shape with an oddly shaped crest on it. If I had to describe it, I'd say you ought to think of a tornado seen from above.

The blade itself is around 29 inches, with a narrow fuller but a relatively broad blade. The point is acute.

Blade's form, don't mind the hilt it's not the same as Nicholas' sword:
[img]http://i40.tinypic.com/madpj7.png[/img][/blockquote][/size]

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[center][b]~Abilities~[/b]
[b]
[i]Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.[/center][/i][/b]

[b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b]

[size=1][blockquote]AP: [2]

[Linear Equation]:
[An attack that strengthens Nicholas' sword with energy. Although it is only slightly stronger than a regular attack, it gets stronger every time it is consecutively used. It reaches its maximum potential after five hits, at which point it rivals the strength of moderate abilities.]

[i]Strength:[/i] Weak
[i]Uses:[/i] One post cool down after the sixth attack--resets the build-up. Can only be used once per post, too, coincidentally.

[Summed Up]:
[Releases a burst of energy from Nicholas' sword. Although it is only weak in power at first, a little stronger than Linear Equation's first attack, it gains in strength proportionate to the amount of enemies currently facing off against Nicholas. It is a wide-area attack meant to obliterate many small enemies--even at maximum strength with a number of enemies greater than ten, it still isn't much stronger than moderate.]

[i]Strength:[/i] Weak
[i]Uses:[/i] No charges, no cool downs, final destination.

[Singularity Division]:
[Bolsters Nicholas' defenses so long as he is alone. If no allies join in the fight, Nicholas' defenses are quite capable of withstanding moderate-level abilities with good results. When allies join in, however, Nicholas' defenses take a great loss and he is, instead, left with mediocre defense.]

[i]Strength:[/i] Weak
[i]Uses:[/i] Passive

[Multiply by Two]:
[Damage dealt by the next attack is two times as great--damage received is also two times as great. One turn only.]

[i]Strength:[/i] Weak
[i]Uses:[/i] Once every five turns, can be used in conjunction with other moves.

[u]Equips[/u]
N/A

[u]Special Abilities[/u]
N/A

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[center][b]~History~[/b]

[b][i]As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.[/center][/b][/i]

[b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b]

[size=1][blockquote]In a world where people are normal and, all the same, exalted warriors fighting whatever threat threatens them (occasionally, they just fight eachother), Nicholas emerged as a person who just wanted to go his own way.

So, hey, he did go his own way. He bade adieu to his own hearth and home, waved Mildain farewell and set off into the sea of stars.[/size][/blockquote]

[b][center]~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[/center][/b]

[center][b]~Class~[/b]

[b][i]Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.[/i]

~ A sword of terrible destruction - The power of the warrior: Invincible courage.

~ A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.
[/center][/b]

[size=1][blockquote][[b]Sword[/b]][/size][/blockquote]

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[u][b][center]~Other~[/center][/b][/u]

[blockquote][size=1][Put anything else you want to say about your character in here.][/size][/blockquote]

[High's .Valentine.]

Math. DX

Just a few things.

For Linear Equation, if that is the case then, he can only hit once per post. Making it a total of five posts before it builds up rival a moderate ability. A weak ability that can gain enough strength to rival a strong ability is a bit too much. It is only a weak ability after all.

Otherwise, everything else looks good.

[servant]

-thought all abilities could only hit once per post but sure!-

Consider it edited to rival a moderate attack then! I'll dramatically save the last two AP for later.

[High's .Valentine.]

There's no strict rule against only one attack per post. :\ So I just wanna make sure.

Anyway. Edited.