Demmy Boy.

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Username: katsumi
Current canons: Jasmine, Marlene. Nala.
Canon you're auditioning for: Demyx
Media canon is from: Kingdom Hearts II
Is the current canon taken?: No.
Audition post (400 words): 719 words.

”Why does Xemnas keep sending me on these missions…” the blond haired Nobody thought to himself out loud. He ran his hand through his hair some as he walked along the cobble streets. He was definitely not the man, the nobody, for this. He wasn’t sure why Xemnas always made him go on these missions, to find other’s disposition, etc. He put his hand to his forehead sighing. He pulled out a little white piece of paper, ”Capture so and so…” He read out loud, care-freely. Not serious about this whole mission thing.

He stuck the paper back into his cloak. ”He could have sent Axel, or Xigbar. Why me?” He started to whine, to no in particular. ”Whhyyy?” His cry, echoed through the buildings he was standing between. He looked up at the sky, realizing how the buildings echoed back at him.

Whyy…..

…Whhyyy…..

…..whhy…..

”Who-ah..uh…” He stumbled back some, surprised. He would have whimpered if he hadn’t just noticed that it was his own voice, echoing back at him. ”Hah!” He laughed out, pointing his fingers stupidly at the sky. At the buildings. His laugh also seemed to echo, but not as much. ”Can’t fool me!” He put out, sounding a bit proud that he hadn’t been fooled. But by his own voice? He was a fool. A stupid, clumsy fool. Who would have ended up on his back, or his behind if it had been anything else.

He clicked off a smile, proud of himself. He stuck his hands into his black Organization XIII cloak and walked casually down the cobble stoned street. Walking beneath the starry night. All had been silent, accept for of course the nobodies own voice. Everyone here seemed to be in bed, a good night to sneak about. To complete his stupid mission.

ROOOAOAAWWWRRARARARARARRARRRRRR!

The ground shook send the blond nobody stumbling around, he eventually landed on his behind. ”Wooo—ooh!” He looked towards the clearing ahead of him that he was about to walk into. S-something huge was out there! Fleee! Flee! He staggered to his feet, twisting as he got up onto his feet. As he landed on his feet he ran in the opposite direction he had been going. He started to flail his arms as he ran as fast as he could. He tripped on a cobble stone that struck out of the ground, falling onto his face.

Silence.

Thump, thump~

Run! Run, Demyx. Get up you fool! Come on you wuss!

He let out a soft groan was he lifted his head off the coble stone. ”Woah..uuhhg..” He groaned, he rubbed his head with his hand. He lost memory of what had just happened, had he gotten a concussion from the fall?

Thump, thump~

He rolled over onto his back, sitting up. A bit groggy. He looked up, to see a big giant….bunny! He roared again, showing its razor sharp teeth. And it had tusks! Its big huge paws could crush Demyx in an instant. His eyes grew wide at the sight of the thing. He stumbled backwards, as he grabbed onto the cobble stone beneath him to try and build momentum to stand up. After a few tries he managed and started to flee as he always does. ”Nooo—ooo!!” He shouted, his cries being heard. Echoing like before.

The big bunny thing roared again and thumped forward, towards Demyx.

”Nooo, please don’t eat me!” he shouted, looking back at the huge white fluffy thing. Bunnies were supposed to be cute and cuddly, and soft. This thing was far from it!

He continued to run, the bunny creature behind him.

”Demyx, Demyx!”

Th-he thing just said his name! Called his name. He ran faster. Hoping it didn't catch him that he didn't trip again.

”Demyx!”

Wait…that w-was….Xigbar’s voice.

He slowly opened his eyes, to see Xigbar’s face.

”Dude…what were you dreaming about?” He asked, Demyx.

Demyx looked up at Xigbar, strangly. Confused. ”Wooah...uuh...a monster rabbit…”

“You're so weird….”

Demyx shook his head, ”Everyone keeps telling me that…But I’m not..” He raised both his hands in front of him, laying his palms up like he was weighing something. He tilted his head. Why does everyone keep calling him that? He wasn’t weird, was he? He might be a bit clumsy…but…

Just keep telling yourself that Demyx.

[High's .Valentine.]

Um.

Well, first off, nice pick of situation. However, I feel it is too silly for a major character like Demyx. >__> Even if it is Demyx. There's very little inner thought/personality going in. A lot of the well known parts of Demyx could be seen, but I wish you could have delved deeper and made him less shallow. Demyx definitely is not shallow. This is a rather 'on the surface' audition, as they would say. Most of the personality here anyone can play just by looking him up on Wiki. And he's not so clumsy, or stupid [though a bit...short on the smart stick]. I would have liked more of his musical soul. Touch a bit more on his 'passion' for music.

Over all, I could see a lot of improvement be made on this. Potential yes, but is it enough? Not at the moment.

1/2 denied.

[Akito]

Eh, a little too much pansy. You know what would be cool? If you played on his 'badass' attitude we got only a brief glimpse at in his last fight with Sora. After all, he is only feigning, trying to relive who he once was. In truth, there is no fear, there is no hesitation, there is no mercy.

Also, at least in my mind, he's much less a clumsy idiot and more of a creative free spirit. A person living by their music alone. Unwilling to commit, avoiding of conflicts and perhaps just a bit charmingly eccentric. To be honest, that's just a Fanfic writer's discourse. The Demyx in KH2 was given a guitar and made into a Rockstar on a pretty shallow level.

My apologies, but you should try again.

Denied and locked