Black

[rukio/ black]

~Basic info~

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Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure. [/center][/i]

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Username ~ :Rukio

Other characters ~ :Rukio

Is this character canon? ~ : no

Link to audition thread ~ :

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

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Name ~ :black

Age ~ :? but looks 17

Birthplace ~ : world that never was

Gender ~ :male

Race ~ :nobody
Special Class ~ :

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.

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Physical appearance ~ :he look very similar to another person named rukio, almost like an evil twin, but he has a few key things that are different.
he is 5'11" and skinny but well built, he has black hair and red eyes, he is as pale as a ghost. also has a scar on on his left cheek

Clothing/Accessories ~ :

he has all black clothes. he were jeans, a sleeveless shirt, fingerless glove with the nobody symbol and a neck less with the nobody symbol on it

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.

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Alignment ~ :evil

Behavior ~ : black is a nobody so he try's to find people to steal hearts from. he, however tries to be sneaky about earning the persons trust and then stabbing them in the back, some times literally. he emits a dark aura and sometimes wishes to just be alone in the dark.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.

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Primary Weapon(s)

ID:wrist swords
Quality: average

The two device that houses the swords is black all around. the blades ,one in each device, are about 2' in length and silver. they come out of the top of the devices.

Secondary Weapon(s)

ID:claws

[his fingers get long and pointed and become white. ]

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.

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AP left:4

[white mist]
Black creates a slow moving mist that goes 2' in all direction and if the mist touches the person becomes blind and or disoriented.

Strength: weak
Uses: use 4 times per battles and last for two post

[poison tip]
the blades or claw tips have a poison that takes some health away

Strength:weak
Uses:use 2 times per battle and last on blades for 2 posts and if hit last 2 post

[nothingness]
black creates a white ball that fire about 6' in front of him and if it hits the person their legs lose feeling an makes them slow down 50%
Strength: weak
Uses:uses 4times per battle and last 2 post


Items

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Equips

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Special Abilities

N/A


Minions

N/A


Summons

N/A

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~History~

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.

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Black doesn't know of much where he came from. he woke up in the world that never was and looked at him self and knew who he is and what. he wishes to fell something but not sure what. he killed a man in traverse town and felt wonderful and powerful. he knew this was the feeling he was looking for. he strives to find the strongest heart to consume. he believes that he is not like normal nobodies. he tied to interact with some people but they alway run away from him. so he vowed to kill and take the hearts of all he meet if he can. he is trying to find a way to work closely with the organization, as a personal soldier or something similar.

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~Class~

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.

~ A sword of terrible destruction - The power of the warrior: Invincible courage.

~ A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.

You know that one of them must be chosen. What power will you seek?

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[sword]

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~Other~

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[High's .Valentine.]

Whoops! Almost forgot about this. Sorry.

Okies. Someone's had this kind of character before, where the heartless is 'human-like' and intelligent. Technically, this kind of phenomenon does not happen in the KH universe with the exception of Xehanort's heartless, which is one of those ultra rare situations. But even Xehanort's heartless did not have a human body to begin with, only gaining it after he possessed Riku and changed to fit his own body. So...unless Black had managed to take over someone's body as a heartless, there is no possible way that he would look exactly like Rukio.

Also, Rukio would have had to have the will power to match Ansem if he was to retain his semi-human mind and personality traits. While I don't doubt that your character has will power, I don't think his could have marveled Xehanort's.

So what do I suggest?

In order to stay relatively canonical and KH, I would suggest changing your character so that it's more apparent that he's a heartless. A stronger lust for hearts, less 'human' and more monster. Also, his appearance would have to alter slightly. I wouldn't mind something like the dark Sora in the game.

Either that, or you could change your character into a nobody. You would be able to keep all of this, even the lust for a heart back. The only thing you would have to change is your species, and probably alter the history and ability slightly.

Or your last option is to convince me that your character deserve to remain the way it is. But you would have to come up with a really good reason.

That is all for now.

[rukio/ black]

ok change to a nobody, slightly changed the ability, and slightly change to history

[High's .Valentine.]

Okies, onto the actual moderating. XD

• How many blades on the primary weapon?
  
• Is White Mist avoidable in any way? Give it more details.
  
• For Nothingness, the person doesn't necessarily...lose their legs do they? .__. You mean they lose the feelings in their leg, correct? While the ability is alright, I can't really allow you to just take away a character's mobility with the snap of the fingers. Does Black need to do something in order to activate this ability? Make it sound harder for Black to perform this ability. And maybe not completely stop them, but rather slow them down, or cause them difficulty.

That is all for now.

[rukio/ black]

changed

[Loz]

Okies! Good enough for Highwind! Sorry, too lazy to switch back and forth with accounts.

Accepted, locked, and moved.