Luke Resse

[xxxlatiasxxx]

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~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure.



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Username ~: xxxLatiasxxx

Other characters ~: None yet.

Is this character canon?: No

Link to audition thread ~: N/A

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.



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Name ~: Luke Resse

Age ~: 15

Birthplace ~: Twilight Town

Gender ~: Male

Race ~: Human

Special Class ~:

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.



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Physical appearance ~:

Clothing/Accessories ~: Luke wears a dark green jacket, a gray shirt, blue jeans, and black shoes. He has brown eyes, short brown hair, and white skin.

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.



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Alignment ~: Good

Behavior ~: Luke Resse is happy and calm most of the time. He can get a little irritated when he hears something disturbing like a world is being attacked by Heartless or something. When he sees someone who is an enemy to him he tries to be as calm as possible when talking to or facing that enemy. The thing that irritates him the most is when he is outnumbered by the enemy. He is slow to anger at friends or family.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.



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Primary Weapon(s)


ID: Sword

Quality: Average







Secondary Weapon(s)


none

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.



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AP left: 6



Dragon Transformation
Luke Resse can turn into a dark green dragon in this form his lower body is dark green, the rest of his body is gray, he has dark red eyes, his ears are flat, the gray spot in the middle of his face in this form is gray and shaped like a tear drop and on his chest he has a dark blue triangle-shaped marking.

Strength: moderate
Uses: Passive


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Special Abilities
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Minions

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~History~

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.



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Luke Resse was born a few months after his father passed away. He lives a normal life with his mother in Twilight town. He goes to a public high school after school he goes to work he works at the local library in Twilight town. When he’s not working he enjoys reading, flying his space ship, and drawing.



When he is drawing he likes to draw stuff from his favorite movies. He likes reading fantasy books. If he's out flying he likes to visit other worlds to see what he can learn from the people there. He likes too take his dragon form a lot when in another world or in his own home town. He hopes that one day the Heartless and any other evil out there in any other world might be one day destroyed.

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~Class~

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.



A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.



You know that one of them must be chosen. What power will you seek?

A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~Other~

I can't think of anything else I need to add.

[nascent]

Took the liberty of cleaning up the look of your profile a bit. Didn't change any info, though.

Alright, there's a few things that need to be addressed before this character's ready to roll. For one, you need to add in your character's Physical Appearance. I notice you have a few details in Clothing/Accessories; if you're going to merge them into one description it really oughta go under Physical Appearance.

Your Dragon Transformation is a little... meh. It's a decent visual description, but it's lacking a few key details like what type of dragon and how big he is in this form. Description aside, there's a few equally practical details that you ought to work on. What are the advantages gained in dragon form? Superior strength? How strong? Fire breathing? Needs to be listed as a sub-Ability; describe the range and damage of the flame breath. Flying? How fast, for how many turns at a time, etcetera.

Bottom line: details, man!

Also, unless he's always stuck as a dragon the Ability can't be listed as 'passive'. You should put down the number of turns it lasts, then the cooldown time after it ends before he can become a dragon again.

(Additionally, you have 6 AP left with which to create more Abilities or power up your Dragon Transformation to Strong.)

(Also, the lower half of your History... isn't history at all. That kind of info should go up under Personality.)

Since you're new here and this may be a bit overwhelming, I offer you the Official Final Mix Flash Guide to aid you in understanding. If you still need help, I'll gladly lend a hand and answer any questions you have.

[High's .Valentine.]

Been more than one week.

DENIED. for now. Please PM one of the staff members to ask for the thread to be moved back.