Cassia Armoe

[Kaxrne]

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~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure. [/center][/i]

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Username ~ : Kaxrne

Other characters ~ : Not at the moment

Is this character canon? ~ : Nope

Link to audition thread ~ :

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

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Name ~ : Cassia Armoe

Age ~ : 17

Birthplace ~ : Traverse Town

Gender ~ : Female

Race ~ : Human

Special Class ~ :

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.

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Physical appearance ~ : Cassia's dark brown hair comes to about her mid back, slightly wavy. A pair of yellow eyes hide behind her long parted bangs. She stands around 5'4 1/2 and has the bust size of 36-D. She always has painted blue painted fingernails.

Clothing/Accessories ~ : Always wearing a brown vest coat that fits her perfectly. A long part goes down the middle of her ripped dress under it she wears a tank top and shorts. She is always wearing a crescent silver moon choker. She wears light pink thigh high socks, with matching boots.

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.

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Alignment ~ : Good.

Behavior ~ : Rarely snaps. Cocky at times. Mostly kindhearted and very giving. She's one of those people with mixed emotions. Her dream is to see her youngest sister grow up and be happy. She likes Ramen, Carrots, leak soup, and chicken. She hates it when she isn't listened to. She's afraid of dying and losing her heart to the heartless. She's actually really closed in to her friends, but always is there for them. Her enemy is a pee pee waiter at the cafe. She likes to sing when she is alone.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.

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Primary Weapon(s)

ID: Razora
Quality:Average

Twin red fans that glow a light green when they are used. Can be used in hand to hand combat. They have small writings on them that are to small to be read.

Secondary Weapon(s)

ID: Winged Staff

A short staff that is rarely used. It has a glowing star on the top of it with wings sprouting out of it.

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.

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AP left:3

Flaming hit
[Able to use fire magic in hand to hand combat. Fire surrounds her hands and consume both of the fans in a dark green flame. Although it's extremely beautiful, do not touch. The flames are able to rip right through anything it touches. The flames are rather small though for its damage.]

Strength: Weak
Uses: 2.

[Dancing Wind]
[Turning each fan closed, able to make a tornado and hurt all the heartless in the way. It sends sharp waves of air towards each heartless that appears before her. It delivers both Physical damage to anyone other then heartless.]

Strength: Fair
Uses: 3.

Items

1.

2.


Equips

1.

2.

3. Chain Bracelet


Special Abilities

N/A


Minions

N/A


Summons

N/A

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~History~

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.

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Cassia grew up in Traverse Town for countless years living in the third district. She lived in peace and took a liking to magic after her father, Natanthial took her to the circus. While out with her younger sisters, the heartless attacked. They distroyed most of her family, but her youngest sister, Mani (Mannitha.) She is seeking for the true reason to why her family was attacked. She was taught magic by a great Wizard, who thought she would use her magic for evil. Hence most of her powers being black magic. She lives in a small apartment in the first district with her now 13 year old sister and a small fluffy cat named speck.

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~Class~

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.

~ A sword of terrible destruction - The power of the warrior: Invincible courage.

~ A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.

You know that one of them must be chosen. What power will you seek?

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~Other~

[She really dislikes being looked down on.]

[stray]

Looks good. Just a few things that need to be fixed. :3

Link to audition thread ~ : khrpffinalmix.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cchain&action=display&thread=8498&page=1

You don't need to post a link for an original character. This is just for canons.

Special Class ~ : Mage (But pretty good in hand to hand combat)

Special Classes consist of Techs, Summoners, Tamers, etc. They are a group that has a specific template and set of rules. See here, here, and here for more information.

Physical Appearance: Really!? 36Ds?! Seriously!? (don't mind me, just joking. xD)

Behavior: You've going to need to elaborate. Not only is there a 5 sentence limit, but try to add your goals, dreams, likes, hates, fears, ect... How does she treat her friends? Her enemies? How does she act when alone?

Primary Weapon Quality: All weapons start at Average strength, but can be leveled up later.

Abilities:
Abilities are rated either Weak, Moderate, or Strong. Weak abilities cost 2 AP to purchase, Moderate costs 4 AP, and Strong 6 AP. You've got a Strong and Moderate ability listed, both equalling 10AP, which is the amount everyone starts with. Therefore, you would have 0 AP remaining.

Flaming hit
[Able to use fire magic in hand to hand combat]

Strength: Fair
Uses:5 hits

I'm going to need a bit more information about this. First of all, how is it used? Does a fire surround her hands as she fights? What color is the flame? How big is it? Also, Fair is not a strength level, unless you mean Moderate. Moderate abilities can have multiple uses, as long as you stay within that ability- like fire for example. You can feel free to keep it as a single use, however. Also, what do you mean by "5 hits" when it comes to Uses? Is she only allowed to use this five times per thread? You'll also need to state a cooldown time. Cooldowns are the number of posts that pass between you last attack. Also, how many posts will this ability last in the first place?

[Dancing Wind]
[Turning each fan closed, able to make a tornado and distroy all the heartless in the way.]

Strength: Excellent
Uses: 3

Again, there needs to be more description. How big is this tornado? How fast does it move? Can it be dodged? Does it need time to power up? How long does the tornado last? Does it do both physical and wind damage? As an Strong ability, you are able to add other wind based effects/moves. Other wise, I would normall consider this and the previous abilities as Weak. Also, be sure to add a cool down.

Items and Equips: These items must be bought. New characters cannot start with these items.

[Kaxrne]

I fixed it. >-<; Is it alright..~?

[stray]

AP left:3

One weak ability plus one moderate ability would equal 6 AP, leaving you with 4 AP remaining. There should never be an odd number remaining.

Flaming hit
[Able to use fire magic in hand to hand combat. Fire surrounds her hands and consume both of the fans in a dark green flame. Although it's extremely beautiful, do not touch. The flames are able to rip right through anything it touches. The flames are rather small though for its damage.]

Strength: Weak
Uses: 2

Ehh... as a weak ability, and as a general rule, this attack could not rip through 'anything.' Just reword that. Other then that, looks good. Nice description. Oh, would this ability be causing magical or physical damage? Also, so are you saying you can only use this ability twice in a thread? If so, for how many posts will this ability last? And how many posts of cooldown will it take until you can use this ability again?

[Dancing Wind]
[Turning each fan closed, able to make a tornado and hurt all the heartless in the way. It sends sharp waves of air towards each heartless that appears before her. It delivers both Physical damage to anyone other then heartless.]

Strength: Fair
Uses: 3

So, is this attack a tornado? Or sharp waves of wind? If so, how big? Are these 'wind blades' about four feet long and two feet tall? How many can you summon at a time? Likewise, I need to know how long this attack lasts and how long your cooldown is.

Everything else looks fine. Just fix these minor things.

[stray]

Almost forgot. You can't have any equips yet. You'll need to erase the Chain Bracelet from your equips list.

[You have one week to edit.
-Highwind]

[stray]

Well, it's been a week. If you want this character moved out of the denied board, pm a staff member.

Denied.