The Summoner's Pet

[nothito]

These here edits will be for the character Dorothy

First, changing her three weak abilities into one strong ability:

[Ruby Red Miracle]
[In times of need, Dorothy can summon forth a ruby red aura around herself that absorbs the damage of one ability or attack, protecting her from any harm whatsoever for that one attack or ability. If an attack extends beyond the turn this ability is used, Dorothy will get damaged as she normally would. It should be noted that, while the aura is usually casted upon her defenseless self, she can also cast it upon her summon to help it in battle. The same rules of the barrier apply for the summon as it would for Dorothy.]

Strength: Strong
Uses: 1 post cooldown

[u][Ruby Red Miracle][/u]
[In times of need, Dorothy can summon forth a ruby red aura around herself that absorbs the damage of one ability or attack, protecting her from any harm whatsoever for that one attack or ability. If an attack extends beyond the turn this ability is used, Dorothy will get damaged as she normally would. It should be noted that, while the aura is usually casted upon her defenseless self, she can also cast it upon her summon to help it in battle. The same rules of the barrier apply for the summon as it would for Dorothy.]

[i]Strength[/i]: Strong
[i]Uses[/i]: 1 post cooldown


That should be free and such. Now for Toto. Using his leftover 6AP AND buying a summon boost for 500 munny.

[Supercharge!]
[Toto is quite the exceptional pet, despite his diminutive status. The powerful pup moves at four times the speed of the average human at full running speed. This speed also relates to the pup’s reaction time, allowing him to react up to four times faster than the average human. Toto is exceedingly nimble and agile due to the power of this ability.]

Strength: Strong
Uses: Passive

[Discharge!]
[Due to Toto’s affinity with electricity, the dog can emit a field of electricity around himself. This electricity fires out of Toto's body in a five foot radius around him in all directions. If an enemy comes into contact with the field, the electricity contained within the field shoots into the enemy’s nervous system and paralyzes them for approximately ten seconds, which basically translates to enough time to be hit by one attack.]

Strength: Moderate
Uses: Three post cooldown

[Thunder Shot!]
[When Dorothy issues the command ‘Thunder Shot’, Toto opens his mouth and fires out a powerful electrical orb of energy. The orb is about the size of a baseball and travels at a fast speed toward the target. Upon contact with a target, the electrical orb explodes, discharging electricity in a one foot diameter from the point of impact.]

Strength: Moderate
Uses: Unlimited, can fire up to five per post

[Thunderbolt!]
[When Dorothy issues the command ‘Thunderbolt’, Toto opens his mouth and fires out a powerful electrical beam of energy in one of two ways. The first way that the meter wide beam can be used is having it travel in a straight path forward until it hits something or Toto cancels out the attack. In this variation, there is a homing feature that allows a greater chance of hitting the target. If the electrical beam passes by the opponent, it does not continue to home in. The second way the attack can be used is the electricity firing off in a wide fan of electricity that shoots out at 45 degree angles relative to Toto. The fan of electricity goes as far as 7 meters in front of Toto before it fizzles out. Both versions of the attack travel very quickly through the air, almost like a real bolt of lightning.]

Strength: Strong
Uses: Once per post for usage one, one post cooldown for usage two

[u][Supercharge!][/u]
[Toto is quite the exceptional pet, despite his diminutive status. The powerful pup moves at four times the speed of the average human at full running speed. This speed also relates to the pup’s reaction time, allowing him to react up to four times faster than the average human. Toto is exceedingly nimble and agile due to the power of this ability.]

[i]Strength:[/i] Strong
[i]Uses:[/i] Passive

[u][Discharge!][/u]
[Due to Toto’s affinity with electricity, the dog can emit a field of electricity around himself. This electricity fires out of Toto's body in a five foot radius around him in all directions. If an enemy comes into contact with the field, the electricity contained within the field shoots into the enemy’s nervous system and paralyzes them for approximately ten seconds, which basically translates to enough time to be hit by one attack.]

[i]Strength:[/i] Moderate
[i]Uses:[/i] Three post cooldown

[u][Thunder Shot!][/u]
[When Dorothy issues the command ‘Thunder Shot’, Toto opens his mouth and fires out a powerful electrical orb of energy. The orb is about the size of a baseball and travels at a fast speed toward the target. Upon contact with a target, the electrical orb explodes, discharging electricity in a one foot diameter from the point of impact.]

[i]Strength:[/i] Moderate
[i]Uses:[/i] Unlimited, can fire up to five per post

[u][Thunderbolt!][/u]
[When Dorothy issues the command ‘Thunderbolt’, Toto opens his mouth and fires out a powerful electrical beam of energy in one of two ways. The first way that the meter wide beam can be used is having it travel in a straight path forward until it hits something or Toto cancels out the attack. In this variation, there is a homing feature that allows a greater chance of hitting the target. If the electrical beam passes by the opponent, it does not continue to home in. The second way the attack can be used is the electricity firing off in a wide fan of electricity that shoots out at 45 degree angles relative to Toto. The fan of electricity goes as far as 7 meters in front of Toto before it fizzles out. Both versions of the attack travel very quickly through the air, almost like a real bolt of lightning.]

[i]Strength:[/i] Strong
[i]Uses:[/i] Once per post for usage one, one post cooldown for usage two


Rings me up tooo 500 munny!

[lysander]

*nod*

Remember to clarify that the Paralyzatin lasts for the entirety of a single turn.

[lysander]

Too lazy to press the modify button. xD

Could you also lower the field size of discharge down to ten feet in diameter?

[Highwind: Too lazy to post. XD

Ruby Red Miracle: Cool down need to be increased to at least four. The stronger the ability, the longer the cool down.

Also, five times is a bit ridiculous even for a summon, especially if it's passive at all times. Lower the boost in Supercharge to at least four times.

Discharge: Hrm. Not only that, because it's a moderate ability, limit it so that Toto's electrical attacks are lowered by one level during the one post paralysis. It would make sense for the dog's electrical charge to be diminished enough to lower his power. Not to mention that having a near unavoidable electrical field is somewhat hax like. Especially if the dog's moving at four times the speed a human can react to.

Hrm. That's all.]

[nothito]

Ruby Red Miracle: I do believe a cooldown of four posts is QUITE ridiculous for a strong ability that blocks only one attack. I'd rather just get the opportunity to change the ability to something else that suits my needs if I cannot bargain for the cooldown to be at most two posts long.

Supercharge: Fixed

Discharge: I rather dislike the idea of the power of electrical attacks being lowered simply because Toto's excess electricity is no longer surrounding him. Especially if the paralysis only lasts one post and not the entirety of the time that Toto's powers are lowered. Changed the ability to something more unsuitable of a power down.

[lysander]

*ahem*

Final changes, I'd like you to make before this goes straight to acceptance.

Increase Discharge to a four post cooldown, because in conjuction with his speed, it basically means a free attack of any strength, which I feel is a little bit of a cheap combo. Or put a limit on the amount of uses. Makes no difference to me.

To compromise between reason and High, make Ruby Red Miracle a two post cooldown and consider it good.

Bump thunder shot down to four a turn, and specify the speed at which they move.

Could someone with strong level speed or evasion conceivably dodge Thunderbeam? Also specify how much damage results.

[lysander]

Bump.

[seraph]

Spoken to Puppy about thse updates since they weren't looked upon for a month. I asked what was going on and they said to lock the thread since they have lost interest. So...

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