Cain Savage

[cain]

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General Character Information
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Character Name: Cain Savage
Character Age: 19
Character Gender: Male
Character Race: Human
Character Position: Neutral
Character Personality: Cain is a very mad man. He is tired of people crying over how they had a bad life, or a bad relationship, when he had many many worse things happen to him. He doesn't cry, and does not believe men should cry. He is a confederate. [Three sentences required]
Character's Appearance: Cain is 6"4, dark black hair, cut short, and he has broad shoulders. Kinda short legs. And decent length arms. He is very buff. [Three sentences required or a link to a picture]
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Battle Information
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Weapon Name: [If wanted]
Weapon Appearance: A whip, given to him by his anceostors who owned a slave plantation during the civil war. It is old style rope, that glows green. It has at the very end a blade. [Three sentences required or a link to a picture]

Abilities: Cloak- Cain can turn into the looks of his enviroment instantly, Blink- Teleportation, and Silence- Cain is quite when he walks/runs, and things are very quite if he makes noise.

Additional Abilities: [Abilities that you have bought/earned. This section is ONLY to be touched by staff upon you buying/earning an Additional Ability.]

Special Abilities: [Abilities that do not count toward your maximum total amount of Abilities. This section is only to be touched by staff.]

Items: [Items you have bought/earned. This section is only to be touched by staff.]
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Character History: Cain was born in the land of "Beauty and the Beast", in a farming community. He has grown muscules from working on the farm all day. He has grown a hatred for the world for being excluded from life. He has not got any freinds except the farm hands he works with. He is confused and mad. He has also grown into a intelligent person. After work with nothing to do, he would read books about everything. He left his home in search of war, and fun. So here he is.
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Other: Cain is not a very nice person if you walk in his path, even more if you get in the path and stay..
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Anything extra you want to add?: Cain's quote is "Evil Knows Evil"

[Admin]

You need to explain what each ability does.

Also, you need to KH-itize your history.

[Medy]

Include a more detailed history. At the moment, it tells me hardly anything about any aspect of his past whatsoever.

[cain]

i added a little more history is that enough?

[Medy]

It meets the requirements, I suppose.

Approved, locked and moved.

[Medy]

This profile has been moved back for reference for the user 'cain'.

It is also currently pending, due to having an illegal teleportation ability. Please, Cain, if you wish to keep this character, alter the teleportation ability so that he must wait for two turns after using the ability before he can use it again.

Also, note that with both of your characters pending and not approved, you cannot role-play with either.