Armand Christophe

[three]

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~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure. [/center][/i]

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Username ~ : Three

Other characters ~ : None

Is this character canon? ~ : No

Link to audition thread ~ :

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

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Name ~ : Armand Christophe

Age ~ : 26

Birthplace ~ : Armand Christophe's House

Gender ~ : Male

Race ~ : Redguard

Special Class ~ : Biology

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.

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Physical appearance ~ : He is a black man with a sultry face that echos through the undying ages. His skin is blacker than the darkest universe in the heavens where only three black stars remain. Black star = Black hole. According to the general theory of relativity, a black hole is a region of space from which nothing, including light, can escape. It is the result of the defomation of spacetime caused by a very compact mass. Around a black hole there is an undetecable surface which marks the point of no return, called an event horizon. It is called "black" because it absorbs all the light that comes towards it, reflecting nothing, just like a perfect black body in thermodynamics. Under the theory of quantum mechanics black holes possess a temperature and emit Hawking radiation. This is very similar to Armand Cristophe.

Clothing/Accessories ~ : Some light leather armor

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.

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Alignment ~ : Theives Guild also chaotic evil. He is a black hole after all. And those things are bastards/

Behavior ~ :Armand Christophe is the Thieves Guild Doyen for the Waterfront District in the Imperial City. You need to hear about the Gray Fox to join the guild, and then find Armand. He can be found at the Garden of Dareloth in the Imperial City's Waterfront District from midnight until 3 a.m and spends most of the daylight hours in his shack. Armand can only promote you up to the rank of Bandit, and then he hands you over to the other doyen, S'Krivva. After The Ultimate Heist is completed Armand can be found in the Thieves Guild from noon till midnight, or in his house the rest of the time.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.

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Primary Weapon(s)

A lockpick

ID: Drivers licence (can only ride horses)
Quality: Good. Unless it breaks in a keyhole.

Shiny succulent brass passed through his moist voluptuous lips as he sucked on the cool brazen metal. He removed it gently with his big throbbing hands and carefully insertyed the pick into the gaping, longing, wanting hole of the door. The two barbs interlocked, and he twisted rubbing the golden pick softly. The door did not open, and the silvery pick snapped in half. "Well shit" said armand.

Secondary Weapon(s)

ID:

[In this space please give a brief, physical description of the secondary weapon(s) your character wields]

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.

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AP left:

[Insert Ability One name here] Acrobatics
[Description of ability]

Strength: Can jump real high
Uses: Jumping


[Insert Ability Two name here] Security
[Description of ability]

Strength: Lockpickin'
Uses: Lockpickin'


Items

1. Lockpick

2. Lockpick


Equips

1. Lockpick armor

2. Lockpick sheild

3. Lockpick pee pee protector. ( He raises a lot of chickens )


Special Abilities

N/A Well, lockpickin


Minions

N/A Does it look like he does conjuration?


Summons

N/AN/A Does it look like he does conjuration?

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~History~ Once a slave, now lockpick seller

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.

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~Class~ Theif

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.

You know that one of them must be chosen. What power will you seek?

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~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.

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~Other~

My Three app is way better, but I'm not comminted for that kind of pressure.

[Put anything else you want to say about your character in here.]

[LEO LION]

There's a lot wrong here, you should probably check other's profiles to see what's an acceptable profile and what isn't. I'm denying this until you edit the following:



First off, Biology is not a special class, if you aren't a Tech, or Tamer, or Summoner than please leave this blank.

I'd like to see more on HIS appearance... as opposed to the definition of a black star/hole. I imagine that he's not a black hole (you might also want to explain what a redgaurd is in species as well). You should tell us about him in the section of Physical Appearance, not about black holes and the universe and theories.

In alignment you call him a black hole, however I'm not sure if that's an acceptable race. Redguard doesn't read to be a black hole, and characters are supposed to be humanoid. To me black holes sit in space and don't really come foreward into the world. (I will bring this matter up with a higher up staff member for help on this portion).

Behavior. Again, you don't talk about the character and how he acts so much as about where he's from. This is not a section for information about that, it's for how he acts around other people, how he reacts to other people, and what his habits are.

"A lockpick

ID: Drivers licence (can only ride horses)
Quality: Good. Unless it breaks in a keyhole.

Shiny succulent brass passed through his moist voluptuous lips as he sucked on the cool brazen metal. He removed it gently with his big throbbing hands and carefully insertyed the pick into the gaping, longing, wanting hole of the door. The two barbs interlocked, and he twisted rubbing the golden pick softly. The door did not open, and the silvery pick snapped in half. "Well shit" said armand. "


I'm not sure what you're doing here. It seems like his Drivers License is supposed to be his lockpicking device, yet you describe it as a piece of metal. ID is not for things like personal identification, it's for what the weapon is called. A lockpick would more appropriately fill that field. It would also be more appropriate to describe more what the pick looks like as opposed to him using it. Though your description is indeed lovely, it doesn't fill the requirements.



You have 10 AP points to spend (seeing as you don't have a special class) WEAK abilities are 2 AP points, MODERATE abilities are 4 AP points, and STRONG abilities are 6 AP points. You put either WEAK, MODERATE, or STRONG in the "strength" area. You need to describe what your ability does, as you've said nothing of the kind. And uses is how many times the ability can be used in combat. Depending on it's strength it can be used more or less with a longer or shorter recharge time. Please fix these accordingly.

Items, Equips, Special Abilites, Minions, and Summons should be left blank since these come from the shops and you haven't seem to have bought anything from the shops.

Your history is completely blank. You need something here. We cannot accept this profile.



You have three days to fix this. I will contact Bilby to go over this as well and add in anything that he might also be concerned with.

[High's .Valentine.]

Highwind from the dead here.

Please READ the rules. It's apparent from this template here and the audition you put up that you didn't even bother to venture into the rules section and the rules are the backbones to character making here. I cannot stress how much you need to follow procedures when making characters so that it's easier on the mods and easier on you.

Also. I'm not an idiot. And I'm sure Lovey picked it up too, but just didn't want to imply anything, but the subliminal messages behind your appearance is unappreciated. Call me immature or sick-minded, but I KNOW I'm not the only one seeing what I'm seeing. I'm giving you a warning. This is a PG forum. So watch yourself.

[three]

LolLol guys, go play Oblivion and gain a sense of humor.
I sat through all your rules, even watched the little flash thing with Hades (which was pretty amusing and original I must say).
Perhaps I haven't quite flushed out the troll within me, but I honestly didn't think any of you would take this seriously, so it wasn't really trolling since it was intended as a joke. I expected better from a site as well crafted and apparently intelligent as yours.
I'm glad you handled it nicely though, incase I really was as stupid as this to actually think I'd written a good application

Anyway, I also wrote this because it broke my heart that I wasn't allowed to apply as the lovely Black Waltz 3 because I don't have an Original Character. One of your mods even agreed with me that it was a stupid rule and wished it was never there. Boo hoo. /cry
But honestly, I'd like to know why. Why is this rule in place? I was told it was so I wouldn't instantly abandon my character, but I'd never do that! And besides, surely it isn't that hard to delete people for inactivity. I think it was also brought up something to do with character development. Okay, I can get that in a way, but, someone who has been role playing for years shouldn't really have to go back to basics if they don't want too.

Trust me, I can develop my own characters, it's just, well, I don't really want to role play them on a kingdom hearts site. It sounds silly, but, I just don't like rping OCs in a fandom. Even though I usually pick a minor character to develop and mold to my own, lol.

I know you can't make exceptions, that would be unfair. But, the character I want to apply for basically REQUIRES you to develop him. Honestly he has like, 10 lines in game or something? And my history in my app for him is quite long, mostly because I've developed him anyway. I know how to character develop, it's not hard.

Bah, I'm probably boring you now. So sorry about this, I just wanted to join an active (good) site for once. Thank you for your time.


Go ahead and delete this if you see fit (Or move it into denied so people can lol at it)

Oh god, my baby parrot needs fed now, (he eats baby formula, how cute?!).

<333 Thanks guyss -Waves-.

[High's .Valentine.]

Do understand that the staffs are not mind readers. We are not going to be able to automatically tell whether something is a joke or not, especially when it's the profile of a new member. And the first impression we've had of you is far from pleasant, to be honest. Taking profiles SERIOUSLY is also part of the mod's jobs, in case you can't tell. There's no point in moderating profiles if we think they're all jokes.

Also, the rule is in placed mainly to ensure activity from new members, thus making a necessity. Thirty posts is also a ridiculously low amount of posts if you're active. If you have trouble dedicating yourself to the forum for a week or two, then you can forget about getting a canon. You don't HAVE to get an OC to get 30 posts. We never gave guidelines to specify HOW you should get those 30 posts. So you don't need to complain about getting an OC if you don't want to. I'm not here to regulate whether you can develop characters or not. My job is to make sure the rules are followed.

If you feel the need to try and revoke this rule, feel free to put up a complain in the Suggestion board under the General Chat area. We can continue this there.

As for this profile, it is DENIED.

I discourage any members from posting joke profiles. The mods spend a ridiculous amount of time reading and moderating profiles. And if we're taking this seriously, then so should you.