Ziya Talec

[Mizan Asim]

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~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure. [/center][/i]

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Username ~ : mizan

Other characters ~ : Mizan Talec

Is this character canon? ~ : No

Link to audition thread ~ :

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

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Name ~ : Ziya Talec

Age ~ : 19

Birthplace ~ : Celderat (Destroyed)

Gender ~ : Female

Race ~ : Human

Special Class ~ :

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.

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Physical appearance ~ : Ziya is shorter than her brother, standing at a normal 5' 11", and has a very lithe and athletic body with a small amount of muscle definition. At first glance she could be mistaken for a gymnast or acrobat.

Ziya's hair, much like Mizan's, is platinum blond and falls to the middle of her back. She often leaves it down, although when working out she will pull it back into a pony tail.

Ziya's eyes are such a bright blue that they seem to glow. This tends to attract attention in a crowd, and has led to some misconceptions in the past.

Clothing/Accessories ~ : Silver breastplate with gold trimmings, silver boots and greaves, black tights under greaves, angelic themed gauntlets.

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.

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Alignment ~ : Chaotic Good

Behavior ~ :Ziya is a very kind and polite person usually. She always has time to listen, and will drop anything to help someone. Some have taken advantage of this fact in the past, but she continues to believe in and trust anyone who wants help. The only time Ziya will not help someone is if it involves hurting innocent people.

Ziya is also rather excitable, and has actually been compared to Yuffie by several residents of Radiant Garden. The two share many traits and habits, although Ziya doesn't try to sneak up on people. She does tend to tackle her friends in a hug now and then, but Mizan has been trying to get her to stop.

Ziya is very flexible about most things, but there is one thing that she cannot abide. Abuse of any sort - verbal, physical, or mental - cannot be tolerated by her, and with her outgoing attitude she will walk right up to the offender and speak her mind without a qualm. Actually, She has no tact whatsoever, and will speak her mind regardless of circumstances. Luckily Mizan is usually there to fix what she messes up.

Ziya has a special bond with her younger brother, Mizan, and will do anything to help him. She does tend to be a bit mischievous sometimes, including one incident involving Mizan's pants being on fire, but mostly she works with him to search for survivors. Cederat's destruction hit her hard, and she masks the pain when around others, though she still grieves occasionally when she thinks no one is looking.

Despite all of this, when in battle Ziya becomes a different person, due to extensive martial arts training. She achieves an almost meditative state during a fight, and grows calm and focused. Often Mizan will suggest a sparring match - which usually ends up in a draw - just to get her to listen to what he is trying to tell her.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.

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Primary Weapon(s)

ID: Wings of Light
Quality: Average

Secondary Weapon(s)

ID: Small dagger

[An ordinary 6 inch long steel dagger hidden in Ziya's right boot. Weighs about 2 lbs.]

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.

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AP left: 0

[Speed Shot]
[By focusing on her bow, Ziya can drastically increase the speed of her shots, to the point that she can fire one per second (3 per post). This ability is only useful against large groups or large enemies, as Ziya cannot aim properly while using it. She also must remain in one spot for the duration.]

Strength: Moderate
Uses: Lasts until canceled or 2 posts pass, and cannot be used again for another 2 posts.

[Martial Artist]
[Ziya trained in several martial arts before her world was destroyed. As such, she is quite talented at close quarters combat, and can best nearly anyone who has no superhuman abilities.]

Strength: Moderate
Uses: Passive

Fire
[Ziya can use fire magic just enough to set one thing on fire or shoot one fist sized fireball 10 feet.]

Strength: Weak
Uses: Once every 2 posts.

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Special Abilities

N/A


Minions

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Summons

N/A

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~History~

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.

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Ziya was brought into this Realm by Elam, a Dragoon who could manipulate Light, and Layla, a Paladin who used Darkness. As was normal on Calderat, Ziya's elemental affinity was from one parent and her gender was from the other. Everything changed when her brother was born a few months later. He was known as a "Balancer," meaning he could use both of his parent's elements, and could combine them into one, new, element.

Despite the attention Mizan got, Ziya became friends with him almost immediately, and the two were inseparable. Even Mizan's unstable moods lessened around Ziya, most likely due to the Light within her. They went to school together, and when Ziya went to college Mizan followed the next year. She was in her second year of college and had just gone home for a visit when the attack came.

Ziya woke up only to see Mizan chasing what she now knew to be Heartless out the front door. The next thing she knew, she woke up in Olympus Colosseum. In order to survive Ziya became a competitor in the Games. Her martial arts and archery skills gained her quite a bit of munny and local fame. Over the next few months she got the Wings of Light and her armor, then got a ride to Traverse Town to search for Mizan. She has been doing odd jobs there since arriving, usually exterminating Heartless. While she is worried about Mizan, she knows that his powers will keep him safe. It is only a matter of time before they meet again. She just hopes he doesn't get annoyed by anyone.

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~Class~

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.

~ A sword of terrible destruction - The power of the warrior: Invincible courage.

~ A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.

You know that one of them must be chosen. What power will you seek?

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[Sword]

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~Other~

[Older sister of Mizan]

[seraph]

Hmm. There's a few problems with this.

First of all is your weapons. Yea you've named them as such and basically described what they look like. However they need dimensions. Lengths, sizes, weight that kind of thing. It's important due to the amount of debates we have over combat in threads. Plus a little more descriptive material about them wouldn't hurt either, like what they're made from and unique features about the weapons.

Second is more of a reminder than a problem. You do realize you have 2 AP left to spend on your abilities if you wish? I say this because you didn't state anything next to 'AP Left' which I am to assume means you want to spend all 10?

Thirdly is the History again. Its way to short. In general its seems like this character was rushed from a personality and history aspect. I'd like to see a little more fleshing out of Ziya in her history like a more in-depth exploration of the relationship between her and Mizan. Her personality is generalised to a 'do gooder' in which shouldn't really be acceptable. Each character is different and its within the personality especially that this shows. Show of your creative side is what I'm trying to say. It's in there you just have to go wild with it xD.

Once these have been looked over and rectified it should be fine.

[Mizan Asim]

Thanks for the advice, I knew I'd forgotten something. Is that enough description in the background and weapons? I can add more if needed, but it will be hard.

[seraph]

Thats good enough for me.

Accepted, Locked & Moved