Holly Sybille

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~Basic info~

Behind every great individual, there is that voice which keeps them going onward and toward their next great adventure. [/center][/i]

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Username ~ : katsumi

Other characters ~ : Others..>>;

Is this character canon? ~ : No

Link to audition thread ~ :

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~Character Info~

Waking up in the morning, your thoughts are cluttered. It takes a moment for you to fully become aware of your surroundings, but once you do, everything about your life comes back to you.[/center][/b][/i]

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Name ~ : Holly Josephine Sybille

Alias: Holly, Holly the Waterbender. Josie

Age ~ : 23

Birthplace ~ : Winter time

Gender ~ : Female

Race ~ : Human and one third Water Spirit

Special Class ~ :

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~Appearance~

As you are heading out the door of your house, a small glimmer of light catches your eye. You turn around and see a mirror, putting you face to face with your reflection.

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Physical appearance ~ : Clicky! D:

Holly has light brown hair; it’s almost a white color. It’s long and curly. She usually has it up with some strands of loose hair that is curly. She has long bangs that are about chin length, usually forced to the side of her face, though at times they can fall into her eyes. She has soft peach colored skin. Dark blue eyes, though at times in the sunlight they can seem a lighter shade of blue. Her lips are a pink peach color. On her forehead is a symbol of a water drop, it’s a light blue color and is usually hidden beneath her bangs. Holly stands to be about 5’7”, and weighs around 125 lbs. She’s 23 years old, though she does kind of look older. Her stature is quite feminine, since she is a woman, but she also has a few muscles here and there, presenting her with a strong feature. She has grown out of her childish look, a serious look about her now. She has learned to grown up, and with that has come her new appearance.

Clothing/Accessories ~ : She wears blue earrings, dangling from them are two circles on each ear and a pendant. She wears a strapless white shirt that laces up in the front, though usually it reveals her chest area. And she wears a white skirt that comes only half way around her, so she wears shorts that are a pale shade of dark blue. The skirt has a light blue trim around it. She can usually be seen wearing a jacket that covers her chest area revealing nothing about the upper part of her. It’s a light shade of gray with a blue gray trim and where it buttons it is blue gray color. She can also be seen wearing a white sweater with fluffy trim, which comes below her shoulders. She wears gray boots that come to about half way up her calf; at times she can also wear shoe snows with fluff on the inside.

Holly usually carries an old dagger with her that she has only used once, to remind her of her past. She will probably never use this again. You can still see blood stains on it. She has in scripted onto the blade one word, “Fate”.

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~Personality~

As you're walking through the door, you see many sights that influence your mood. The different feelings that suddenly wash over you are many, leaving you with a strange mix of emotions.

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Alignment ~ : Good

Behavior ~ : Holly is a serious one, but at times she can also be playful. She’s sweet and seemingly innocent, though she is strong and serious at heart. This strong part about her comes from her past. She can take things too serious at times, like a joke, but then it can hit her that the person only meant that as a joke and not to hurt her or someone else. Holly can get serious during fights or missions or something. She takes her life and her job seriously, though at times she wouldn’t mind some humor and joking around with her friends. At times she can seem slow in the mind, but then after a couple seconds she will get it and then laugh at herself for not getting it in the first place. She loves to hang around with her friends and family and just enjoy the time with them; though her family is gone she will always remember them.

She does sometimes keep secrets and information from others but that’s only because she doesn’t want to get hurt. She really does care about others, especially the ones close to her heart. She can block them out sometimes though. It’s not easy to gain her trust, and it’s also not easy for her to tell others how she feels. She was once shy but as she grew up she began to grow out of that phase, it’s still kind of there though. It would be best to not tick or piss her off; you wouldn’t like that side of her. She can get really mad and throw a tantrum. At times when she is pissed or frustrated she will isolate herself from others, even her friends. She just needs a bit of time alone, but a helping hand would also help. She likes help from others, though she doesn’t show it. It’s just she feels that she doesn’t need, or in her case want help from others because she never needed it in the past. But in reality, everyone needs help every once in awhile. It just hasn’t occurred to Holly that she does.

Holly is pretty patient but at times she can become rushed and not wait up for her companions. Holly was very smart as a youngling, she studied very hard and it paid off. She now works hard as a guardian and going on missions. And as Holly’s element, water, she can be unpredictable and can become very destructive. She often needs time alone to remember where she ends and others begin. And to let what's been stirred up by life find its way to a quiet calm again. She is a person who needs people, but also needs the restoring space of solitude. She can become very forceful and changeable.

Holly would probably be nothing without her friends. Her friends are what keep her going; they support her no matter what are willing to lend a helping hand. She doesn’t like to be alone; she feels she’s alone in the world so friendship is everything to her. When she was a child she barely had any friends and now she hopes to gain as many as she possibly can, even if they do depart from each other they will always be in her heart. But, she always never seems to have friendship in her life…. Well she did. And she hopes to again.

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a Heartless appears in front of you, brandishing its claws and threatening to attack. You reach for your weapon and equip it, ready to defend yourself.

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Primary Weapon(s)

ID: Crystalgenisis
Quality: Fine-tuned

[This is a sword that has a notched blade with a blue hue to it, with skulls engraved on it. Its' grip is wrapped with purple leather with feet and zigzags dyed into it. The pommel bears a single sapphire. The sword is made out of some unknown metal, but it is very tough and can with stand water. It seems to akin to the element water. She usually has it wrapped in purple cloth since it always seems to glow. Clicky D:

Ability: Illumination; the sword seems to glow brightly, and enables Holly to somewhat see in the dark. The source of its glowing is unknown, some say it is made from a precious stone that seemed to illuminate even in the most darkest of places such as a cave.
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Secondary Weapon(s)

ID: Sphincter

[A magical staff that helps Holly control water and ice, no other element. It has a red staff, and a silver/gray cross on it with feathers and things dangling from it. The cross has jewels engraved into it. The staff is usually wrapped in a purple cloth that is attached to it.
Clicky D:]

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~Abilities~

Just as you're about to fight the creature, you feel the power of your ancestors filling you. The strength of a thousand men courses through your veins as you prepare for battle.

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AP left:

[Hydroforce]
[Holly as the Water bender is able to manipulate water pressure, allowing for techniques such as grabbing things and cutting through objects. This power is connected to her present emotional state, if she looses her temper her water bending is intensified, but in turn, control is lost. There is only one time when Holly cannot use this ability at all is when the moon is in a lunar eclipse. At times when Holly has conflicts inside of her mind, her water controlling becomes more destructive then when she is calm and not so angry, etc.

In her weak (calm) state the extend of her power is that she can create small 'whips' of water which is a lashing tendril of water to swipe at an opponent. She can also create balls of water to throw at her opponent (limited to five small ones or one huge ball of water). But basically what this ability does is shape roughly a small pool (envision a hot tub x3) of water into objects.

When in strong (angered) state she can pommel a wave at someone, roughly the size of a small pool. ]

Strength: Strong
Uses: Passive, may weaken over time. Can be self inflicted if she loses control of this ability. In dry places Holly's ability will weaken.

With her stronger state she will need a 2 post cooldown.

[Water Skin]
[This is defensive water ability. Holly makes her skin like water, or ice, for added defensive but she will sacrifice some speed to use it. The water like shield around her skin will block non-electrical attacks for when she uses water and non-heat for when she uses ice. This lasts for 3 turns, and she can only use it after 3 more turns.]

Strength: Weak
Uses: Last for 3 posts/turns and can be used only after three more turns. Can be used three times per thread.

[Choking Riptide]
[With a simple hand motion, Holly is able to send tentacles of water from underground up, latching onto the enemy's limbs to keep them still for another attack. She can create up to three tentacles and it takes a few moments for them to 'gather' on the surface and latch onto her enemy. They are medium-strength and can be cut in half with a sword, but a weak punch won't do much damage.]

Strength: Weak
Uses: Can be used three times per thread with a four post cooldown. Can create three tentacles.

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~History~

As you slay the last of the beasts, you put your weapon aside, and walk away, knowing your tale of bravery will be told for thousands of years to come.

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Holly grew up in a small, poor town called Lesallia in the world of Avalon, which is now lost to her. She doesn’t know the path back to it, she has wandered so much that she doesn’t know how to get home. She doesn’t even know if she does want to go back. She was the middle child of five children; she had two older siblings, a sister and a brother. She also has two younger siblings, both boys. It was hard being the middle child because she would often get bossed around by her older siblings to do chores and take care of her younger siblings. The Sybille family was known for their magic yet they could not teach their children how to wield it, they didn’t have the money and they were in the lower classes who were not allowed to learn magic, yet they had magic in their bloodline. Holly would change that though. Magic was something that interested Holly; she wanted to learn it to know what it did. So she secretly taught herself how to do and use magic. She read through books about magic and anything that seemed to relate to it. She found out that one could bend an element such as fire, air, earth and water to their will. The books said that one was born of an element, but Holly did not know which element she was born with and she didn’t know how to. As she got older and older she couldn’t teach herself how to use magic for it called for her knowing what element she was born with. The only way that she could think of to know which element was to ask her parents and they rarely spoke of magic.

One day she got up the courage to ask her father since her mom usually just changed the subject when it came to a subject that she did not want to talk about. She went up to her father asking him, well casually getting to what she wanted to ask. He shook his head telling her that magic was a bad subject for the family. But Holly insisted that he tell her why. So he did, knowing that she would probably continue to ask him that she wouldn’t take no for an answer. He told her that magic had caused many people to die. That was why they hadn’t taught their children to wield it because they were afraid that they would die and that they would go crazy because magic often made people go mad for more power. But Holly still wanted to learn magic that she would use it for a good cause. Her father shook his head he had told her the consequences but he wouldn’t stop her. He knew that when she had her heart set onto something that she wouldn’t change her mind. He patted her on the head and told her to not die and to use her magic for a good cause, to not kill others and for the magic to not get the best of her. She promised him. And she never breaks any of her promises. He then told her that The Sybille family was waterbenders.

As she grew up she had little friends, there were some from the town and stuff. Holly was usually by herself reading. She did play with her brothers and the other children but she was mostly by herself. She also worked since her and her family was poor; she worked as a maid in one of the nearby castles. That was where she got most of her books from, borrowing them and returning them the day after. There was one of the people in the castle who knew of this, yet he let her. It seemed she was so passionate about learning magic.

When she was 14, she was under a lot of stress for her mother and father both became sick with a disease that had been affecting itself within the town and had spread to her parents, and maybe soon her siblings. She tried her best to provide for her sisters and brothers and also help her parents get over the disease. They couldn’t afford a doctor, so Holly had to perform healing spells on her parents, but they didn’t do much, for they were weak spells. She wasn’t advanced that much for higher level skilled, if she did perform one she would most definitely die. Soon her parents both died along with her two older siblings and she and her brothers were left alone to provide for themselves. The town felt no sympathy for them, for they were dealing with their own families who were also sick with the disease. Holly began to work her head off to get some food for her siblings who were only around 4 to 8. Then months later, as the disease was still in the town, it affected her siblings and they died within weeks with no medicine or anything to treat the disease. Thus she was the only Sybille left. Yet, it was strange how the disease did not affect her at all.

Soon she could not pay for the house anymore and didn’t really need it so she took herself and moved into the castle that she still worked at. They told her that she could live in one of the rooms by the stables. She didn’t feel at home though. She knew she would never feel at home. She felt alone…Well, not entirely because there were still people in the castle she knew but still. One day a mage, also known as an earthbender, came to the castle. The castle was under a siege. They tried to defend themselves but they couldn’t so they sent for help. And they were only sent one man. They discovered that some of the castles and kingdoms were also under siege. It was said that an evil force had control of the few dragons that were left in the world. By this time, Holly was 16 and she had a small control over her waterbending. But she wanted to learn from this man, who she found out his name was Elrick Kingslion. He brought away the evil force. The castle was safe for now. She just needed to get up the courage to ask him if he could teach her. He was about to leave the castle and she got up the courage. She told him that she was a waterbender, but she didn’t really know how to control her powers. He smiled at her. He asked her to show him some of the stuff she knew. All she could do was to create a ball of water, but she couldn’t hold it long enough so it just fell into her hand with a splash. He saw she had potential. He asked her name. She replied, Holly Sybille. He knew he had heard that name before. Sybille. But he couldn’t put it on his tongue. He told her she could learn underneath him but she would have to work hard and would also have to accompany him along his travels. She agreed. She had had enough of the castle, though she had gained a few friends.

So that was that and Holly left the castle to travel with Elrick. But she was granted to bring some of the books from the castle with her. She choose the one that had things mainly dealing with the elements and the bending of them. She traveled with him. She learned a lot from him. She even was able to help him defend the kingdoms that hired Elrick. Holly was his apprentice. She trained with him for 3 years, until the day he died. He had also given her a staff made just for her. He was getting old and was slowly dying. Yet, he was still strong and continued to travel until that fateful day. They were attacked by a dark dragon. Elrick died protecting Holly. He had killed the dragon but had died in the process. Holly made a grave stone for him. She would return one day and give him a rightful burial. She took his things and his sword with her. She continued to where they were headed. The dark forces were even more powerful. The world got into a dark era. Holly did not want to become part of it. One day on one of her travels, traveling where ever she wanted she was trying to find something that was still left over from before the dark came. She could not find anything. She decided to work for hire. She needed a living instead of wandering.

On one of her travels she encountered a boy named, Chikato and a girl named Sharlia. All of them could control the element of water. And all of them were all headed towards a town called Myst. They were all different in their own ways. And there seemed to be something strange about Sharlia, but Holly put that aside. They talked toe ach other, instantly becoming friends. Since Holly didn’t really have any friends at all she wanted the three of them to be friends, but they had to go their separate ways. As they reached Myst, they departed. Before they did, they promised each other that they would meet again that they would find each other. Holly went to attend to her business matters to only find out that the person she was hired to take care of was none less then Chikato, one of her friends. The person she promised to meet again. She told the person who hired her that she wouldn’t. But somehow she was persuaded into doing so. She was being controlled by the person. She walked through the town, trying to find Chikato. She had a dagger at her side, ready to kill Chikato with. She could not control her body though. Once she found him. She finally found him. She got close enough and stabbed upwards, at his heart. After she stabbed him, she gained control of her body. She broke down and cried. She had killed him…one of her only friends in the world. She hated herself that she wasn’t able to save him… She tried to heal him, but couldn’t. She didn’t have the power to. She left. But before she did, she left something next to him a crystal in the shape of tear. She wasn’t sure where Sharlia was, but she would probably hate her for killing Chikato... But it wasn’t her fault. She decided to go far away, but she kept something with her the blood stained dagger. She in scripted on it the words ‘Fate’. She never saw Chikato or Sharlia again….

Holly wandered around she would never work for anyone again. She wanted to protect people that was her goal. She became a guardian for travelers. But then she disappeared from her world. She found a door that led her to another world. She found herself in a town that never seemed to go beyond twilight. It was beautiful. She found out the name of the town was Twlight Town, such a wonderful name for a wonderful town. She stayed here awhile; she discovered that she could travel to other worlds in means of a gummi ship. She had been traveling for 1 and half years until she met someone, she instantly fell in love with as did he. Holly had grown up a bit since she came to Twilight Town. She was maturing. The man’s name was Kilik. Holly and he were together for 6 months until he disappeared. And Holly was left alone, but not entirely she was pregnant with a baby boy. But, her baby died when it was born. She named him. Mathius Kronos Sybille. She buried him… She felt abandoned like no matter what she did she would never be forgiven for what she did in her past….

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~Class~

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.

~ A sword of terrible destruction - The power of the warrior: Invincible courage.

~ A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.

You know that one of them must be chosen. What power will you seek?

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[The power of the guardian.]

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~Other~

[seraph]

Very impressive profile. The personality and the history really bring the character to life. Its also quite a tragic story but it makes a good read xD

There are a few problems though.

1) Hydroforce - There needs to be some sort of restriction of usage with this ability. I understand that you can't use it when theres a lunar eclipse but its a little vague when you actually can use it. For example if you were in Atlantica with this description you could increase the pressure of the entire ocean killing all the mermaids, which is never a good thing. What I'm basically asking for here is a limit on how much water you can effect like in cubic meters or something like that. There's also the statement where you claim 'she can also absorb water, to use for her own bidding'. What do you mean by this? Like a defensive manner or healing properties. The former you already have in the form of Water Skin and healing abilities aren't allowed. So please clarify. Now depending on how much water you can manipulate will also effect the cool down time that may be necessary, or lack thereof. If its small enough then I suppose a cool down won't be necessary but I'll have to see what you suggest.

2) Choking Riptide - How many tentacles? How fast do they appear? Can they be broken free from? If so how? This is a very vague ability which needs more clarifying.

3) The final problem is the weapons. They themselves are perfectly fine, you've described them well with pictures and dimensions with background as well. However I'm not sure you'd be allowed the sword to glow when danger is present or the staff being capable of illuminating in the dark. It would be like having a sixth sense with the sword and it could be a 'free' way to counter someone elses ability to make the surrounding area pitch black. I'm going to suggest you upgrade the sword to a fine quality weapon and perhaps add a weak ability for the staff to glow in the dark.

After all of these have been addressed I'll be happy to approve the profile.

[♥ kats KAT kats ♥]

Heh, I forgot about the glowing of both her weapons (I made her awhile back) but I edited the glowing off of her staff and just made her sword pretty much glow all the time (lightsaber for the win!).

I didn't realize how vague Choking Riptide was :x.

But fixed, as best I could :x

[seraph]

Well everything looks OK apart from one thing. Hydroforce is in need of a cool down, simply because of what you can do with it. Let's say 2 posts? Do you agree with that?

Also I took the liberty of editing the weapon quality to fine since you left it as average xD. Which means thats -200 munny but its not like you don't have enough ;D

If you agree with the cooldown everything is good to go.

[♥ kats KAT kats ♥]

Alright, I accept. And you didn't edit the weapon quality so I had to do it myself >D

[seraph]

I did indeed. I was just testing you really xD

Alrighty then...

Accepted, Locked & Moved

200 Munny will be deducted from your account for the weapon upgrade also.