Boo, The Beautiful Nightmare

[boo]

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~Basic info~

Behind every beautiful individual, comes a morbid basic story and it takes one time to paint it like a beautiful bloody picture.. [/center][/i]

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Boo ~ :

Other characters ~ :

Is this character canon? ~ :
No

Link to audition thread ~ :

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~About me, Loves.~

Waking up in the morning to see myself..Drenched in blood from my own body. I don't remember what was going on at the time..or what happened to me..or how the blood got there..It just did. But..I remembered..[/center][/b][/i]

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Boo ~ :

Age ~ :
I believe my age has been nineteen for a while now..

Birthplace ~ :
My birthplace is something I really do not enjoy speaking of..But I was born part of Twilight Town.

Gender ~ :
Uhm, I'm a female. I hope I don't need to check.
Race ~ :
Angel and Fallen Incubus. What does this mean? Do I have wings? No. My history will explain why.
Special Class ~ :
None

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~Appearance~

As I turned around I looked into the reflection of a smashed mirror in a stripped club...I came to see a women or maybe a male..it looked to be more women though...

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Physical appearance ~ :

It is blood, decorating upon my body but I usually appear clean. Although, many do not see my eyes it is an amber color. Beautifully, my eyes tend to glow in the midst of the night. Of course, it's the veins of my mother flowing through me. To continue upon this; I also am tan under all that blood. A caramel color rather close to a gentle mocha.

Clothing/Accessories ~ :
Black, an eccentric color through out the history of man. I wear black most of the time with some cute skirt usually for the simple fact of comfort. Although, I do wear armor during times of battle. A simple armor, of course, coated in black for protection of myself. During simple and peaceful times I'm sure to happily mention that I enjoy a lolita theme. Big skirts, goggles, and very small corsets to adorn my torso.

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~Personality~

I was walking..I felt this odd strange mix of emotions come before me as I seen a pile of dead children holding an angel in their hands..Was it to laugh about?...Or to cry about?...

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Alignment ~ :

I'm the type of person who is to be fit to be a friend but I'm also a type of person to fit to chop your head off with a deadly weapon. I'm someone who is equal to the forces of light and dark. I'm impulsive and very child-like; I have this odd habit of dancing with corpses. I find them..delicate and flowered beautiful yet deceitful in the midst of their last hours. I like to watch people be tortured yet I love kittens. I am the beautiful nightmare I spare to see those who are fit. Giving is like a merciful twist; I am my own god. If I can't control it then it shall be hell. If I can control those voices in my head then I will be an angel. It is all the matter of equality please know through and through we will continue to prosper..Well I will. I am here to survive and be the best there is. Please, understand I, Boo, am not cocky to be precise; I am right. I am a passionate women flaming and feisty..Although, I am shy around new people I do warm up quickly.

I find the oddest things revolting like a child crying..I do not know why but I do not enjoy the thought of children. I had my tubes tied..unprofessionally of course. Well, enough upon this pitiful excuse for who I am! I am unexplainable! Due to the voices in my mind my dear! ~ :

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~Weapons~

Suddenly, a heartless appeared in front me...a weapon ready..branded for my head...I pulled out my own weapon ready to strike back...

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Primary Weapon(s)

ID:Yo-Yo
Quality:

The Yo-Yo; a strong weapon by far in my personal arsenal. It is a double wielded weapon consisting of two familiar yo-yos all the same a perfect disguise as a hobby. The string of the Yo-Yo is galvanized steel iron all together in small strands to form a sharp edge that would cut right through skin upon contact. This weapon is fast and very deadly when coiled upon skin. In close contact the act of the yo-yo can be used like a whip.

This weapon having be the most powerful in my arsenal I do not carry much of anything else..other then the special abilities that come with it. My weapon has a special effect of being light and dark..much like a key..both of these little yo-yos nearly uncut-able and hard to break free of..is my..weapon.

Secondary Weapon(s)

ID:

[In this space please give a brief, physical description of the secondary weapon(s) your character wields]

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~Abilities~

Just as I was about to fight my enemies my feeling of the angels looking over me came through to see me...The feeling of light and dark evening to become one neutral power of the cosmos..

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AP left:

[Fear of Hellbound]
[Fear of Hell Bound is a move where the victim will be inserted mentally into their worst fears. Boo will enter her opponents mind to succeed to project their deepest fears. To do this Boo will make eye contact with her opponent. The worst fear of the opponent will be drawn out mentally and they will be put into a terrible situation of what they fear. To the opponent it will appear as if they are in a whole realm of another world because of mental imagery. If successful, when Boo does this move to her adversary they will be so in-taken with fear they would be mentally drained and scared as to the point inability to fight as well as before. Although, the fluke of this move is when Boo's adversary faces their fears.]

Strength:Strong This move takes up six AP out of the ten.
Uses:[The move is to be used on the opponent for two turns when exposed to greatest fear. After two turns the opponent is release if they did not face their fears in a cost to extreme paranoia. The opponent can still battle well enough to possibly win under extreme fear of what they had seen. After the move, Boo will not be able to use any psychic abilities for four turns.
[Spiders Silk]
[Yo-Yo would split into multiple strands of galvanized iron and nearly invisible to the average eye but due to movement of the yo yo the little line of steel string could be seen if a person stared hard enough. Boo's opponent would be wrapped in a matter of four seconds her opponent would be wrapped in the steel iron. When Boo would pull on her end of the galvanized wire it would inflict pressure onto her opponent. After five pounds of pressure it could legitimately start to rip into muscles. The opponent could break free due to the weak thin bindings.]

Strength:Moderate.Therefore, four AP will be wasted for this move.
Uses:
This move will take two moves to fully succeed. The first post will be it wrapping around the opponent from the head of the yo yo around their body. The second post will be the pressure of the yo yo inflicting by Boo's pulling on the other end.
If the opponent is to break free Boo will be subdued to the use of only one yo-yo until all of the other yo yo will come back together for three posts.


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Minions

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Summons

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~History~

Walking away from the heartless..who beared their last breathe...the people of the town cheered..they spoke the name Boo..it would carry on for years...

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Chapter One
The Beginning
Growing..Growing..It was inside the mothers womb when it began, began a revolution of either life or death for a young child. From the growth of the sperm into the egg borne a new life into the day of life in Twilight town. It would be a day of weeping and glorious salvation among the people in the religious view of things. They were part of a coven of which they spoke the religious remains of the life of mother. Of course, as the child bloomed on the mothers alter expected to be one of wings and very beautiful borne features. The child was born ugly; female and out cast.

The mother of the child, named her a degrading name of the surprise of which they did not know she would bare"Boo." It would be the name that would haunt her as her mothers mess up for the religious coven until Boo began to speak at the age of one. No one knew because she pretended she could not speak. The child was quick of wit and sound of mind. It would be she; one who would begin to save them all into a balanced realm. Boo grew up in the religious center of Twilight Town based on balance and the will of Mother. Although, she forgot all this..because of the evil she had omitted. She began to work among the heartless..the darkness..it was something of interest to her until a nobody had come up to her in human form.

Of course, he did not have a name being long forgotten and had fallen in love at such a young age. It was unexplainable they did things that would be unforgivable in the coven. As a women she had come to love her nobody but it would be no one how he felt to love her. But the coven found out and darkness was lurking in her soul.

After he had gone from her life; deflowered and alone Boo came back to the coven to be ashamed and casted away to her grandfather. A good friend of Cid; creator of air ships she had lived now aboard her own air ship huge and proud of it she managed it along with her grandfather until upon his death when she was fifteen. Boo; began to grow beautiful upon this age. A women and very respected one at this; she would be the now accepted in the coven if she were to return..but she choose not to..She couldn't.

Until one day, the ship got attack. Bearing the heartless on the deck! She could not bear witness to it! Her and her grew bounded towards the deck to fight the heartless! Mother be with her. Boo snuffed out a yo yo and looked at it quite..frustrated. What could she do with the little contraption she bared with her for fun.. It was then she decided to put her fingers to good use and she began to rip off the string quickly and place galvanized iron upon the steel black yo yo. It would be this she would fight with and lose as it would fall in weight due to her weak arms. Boo then enough was toughed by the faint darkness.

It filled her..touched her of what would keep. Darkness would bare her and continue to fill her thoughts for the moment until it formed some kind of thing..It would speak..and continue to speak as it spilled her excellent light mind touched and blessed by the mother. Utter balance now which was corrupt but somehow all anew..it would knock Boo unconscious as the darkness swept her away back to twilight town..the air ship gone. Somehow would never come back..it would be she found two of the yo-yo's perfected..somehow. It would be a memory of how she did this when she was blinded but she knew she hurt from the heartless.

Chapter Two
It Was Pain of What Touched The Mind.

Her sanity gone from her bod as she laughed reaching to her yo-yo's darkness imbued in them with no force of light in them.

"Kill, Kill, Kill!" cried the beautiful banshee as she ran about for the years to come killing anything she seen tending to the voices in her head by killing the weak and hurting herself.

It would be the years where Boo would launder food for polish for her yo-yo. To get the food back she would kill her buyer and to gain her own home it would be in strip clubs where people thought she stripped. Beautiful now, at the age of sixteen and fully blossomed.

Chapter Three
Without love, There Is a Soul Mate.

Dawn and to the dark Boo had always enjoyed nature..some about it calmed her when the fits came along. She had awful abilities now and the voices had taught her the control of others and terribly much more..it was the best of often things of which had happened to her..Boo had been sitting alone on the bench holding a beautiful blue bird until..he came along.

Yes, he, he was someone of beauty to Boo not just physically but in their existence on site. Boo would recognize the dark and light flowing through his being and who he was in between the lines of the pages. She would be maybe complete once more..complete with darkness or light? She did not know.

Chapter Four
Forte.

It was like a music, a drow, her next Sonata or maybe memory. He came to her like an incandescent to his memorable tone..Boo continued to stare at him in the months to come wondering what the man to be thinking. Although, it was nothing of incredible interest..Boo being the loner mental tick she was could only stare and giggle..

Forte, Forte, Forte such a social butterfly to the shy Boo he was the girl opened up to him soon enough to be show him the voice in her head..projecting it for him to understand the sound.

Until he snapped, or so it be a hug. It was her first hug..and a hug as it should be. Snapping her spine; nearly her bones..until they had dissapeared..

It was then her body was in the compounds of a very test tube she would be laid in the test tube to keep straight for the time..and in two years time..she would be released.

Chapter Five
Two is More then One.

It felt odd..her touch again..the Mother caressing her face whispering something about.."Balance Walker." What was this? To keep balance? Yes. It all made sense now..

He was to be here..with her..forever. To teach her again and her him..maybe they could find a way once more..find something to help them both out. They would need to help each other..and there would be arguments among the two mentally insane. But it would be peace..and finally maybe: completion.

Chapter Six
Deterioration.

Gone..It was gone! Her powers! On her knees her hands folded on her lap the amber eyes would look up to Forte to see the astonished look on his face himself. It was all gone except two abilities which Boo held dear.

All those things she had learned the control..was there and only one thing had left to remain was one person: Forte. Her only, song, musician, love: Forte. It would be him who would teach her to walk again like he had done so many times before.

Until she heard the mother to wish them luck upon the journey they seek to balance in this world..what was it? Only she could tell..Praise mother, Boo could only await her forsworn future..

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~Class~

Before you embark on your journey a vision comes upon you. You see three weapons in front of you.

~ A sword of terrible destruction - The power of the warrior: Invincible courage.

~ A shield to repel all - The power of the guardian: Kindness to aid friends.

~ A staff of wonder and ruin - The power of the mystic: Inner strength.

You know that one of them must be chosen. What power will you seek?

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[Mystic]

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~Other~

[Boo a beautiful misery. But I as a roleplayer see no to fit a good plot and not to ruin the plot already here. In other words, I'm not going to fuck up the current roleplay. I do not intend to kill every person on site. Boo is a "Balance Walker." So is her beloved forte. We are "Good guys" don't you think? ]

[angelous]

First off as I pointed out with Forte I am not an actual mod, though the position I hold has been allowed to moderate profiles in the past, and considering our lack of active mods at the moment, I think it should be fine for me to get you to an acceptable level.

First off I'd ask that you redo your appearance. Sure you have a picture, but the sentences you have of her are rather vague, and well don't really describe her appearance at all. As for clothing, I understand that she may wear lots of different outfits, but could you maybe put in a few sentences describing one or two of them that she wears the most? Or maybe even what style of clothing, so that the other members have a general idea of what she's wearing, instead of thinking that she's either naked or wearing a loincloth...

As for abilities, your first one is confusing to me. Could you perhaps reword it or explain it to me? It's kind of hard to judge whether or not an ability is acceptable if one isn't sure of what said ability actually does. Your second one... Well it's more or less in the same boat as the first one. But before I ask you to explain that as a whole, could you clarify one bit in particular:

The Yo Yo will turn into multiple strands invisible to the other

Does this mean that the yo yo strings are invisible to your opponent? Because if that's the case, then I cannot allow this, as it would make it rather hard for your opponent(s) to dodge something they cannot see. Also since it is only a moderate ability cutting to the bone is iffy in my opinion. But as I said with the first one, either explain it more clearly in your next post, or reword it so that it makes more sense, and perhaps that may very well help clear up the whole cutting to the bone is too much bit.

Other than that I find that much like Forte you have some spelling and grammar mistakes in the profile. While not mandatory that you go and fix those as best you can, it does make the profile look nicer. As for yours and Forte's comment about not wanting to ruin the site's plot, I feel inclined to tell you that FM does not have a site run plot. All plots are member run ones, usually being character plots. If the plots are for the entire site, then they are pre-approved by one of the admins. So don't fret about ruining our plot. So long as your role-plays are KH centered, you should be just fine here.

[boo]

Fixed.

[angelous]

Much better thank you for working with me on this, but even with the rewording on your first ability, I still have one more little complaint. Is there any way to avoid being affected by this ability? Meaning does Boo have to make eye contact, does she have to physically touch them, or something along those lines. Eye contact would probably make the most sense, though physical contact would probably be the most practical, at least in my opinion.

Do that and you'll be good to go, at least by my standards.

[boo]

Fixed again dear. :]

[angelous]

Well then, I'm going to say Accepted and locked. I'd move it but I don't have that power. The other staff can feel free to come back and ask you to make other changes though if they feel that I didn't cover everything well enough.

[seraph]

Abilities are the main problem once more.

Fear of Hellbound needs to have some sort of disabling mechanism, eg if someone shuts their eyes for the post that Boo tries to stare at them will that stop the ability. Also can this ability be used again on the same person? If so what are the consequences, does something like nausea happen, or disorientation or can the ability even be used again on the person? To finish off, can this affect people who cannot feel emotions. Nobodies and Heartless in particular? If so then the ability may have to be changed which would require extensive re workings. Rather than go into them now I'll wait till you had made a choice.

For the second ability, I'm not quite up to speed with this splitting of the wire into four. Does that mean it surrounds the target from both sides or splits into smaller wires that are parallel with each other but all come from the same side? I'm just having problems visualizing the ability.